Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Mystery poet, this is magnificent. Wow! Loving this because I'm fond of free verse poetry and of the Ocean's beauty. Sublime!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the voting booth.
Sally Law :))

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025

Thank you, Sally, for taking
the time to read and review
my oceanic poem, and for
the thoughtful review. I hope
you have a relaxing Wednesd ay evening!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I really enjoy how your poem captures the ocean's mystery. The way you describe her as both beautiful and fierce is perfect. I like how you write that she can be "smoothly like a sleeping kitten" one moment, then fierce in a storm the next. You've done a great job bringing the ocean to life.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Thank you so much, Michael.
It's very thoughtful of you to
give me a generous review.
Have a good evening and
Wednesday tomorrow.
Blessings ~