His Silence
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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Jacob,
This is a nice, proper ending for your saga. I like the way you tied up loose ends by having Danielle visit the prison and confront Mary. I like the description of what she looks like now, after having time to sit in prison. No lives to influence or control!!
Love the interaction between Callum and Danielle. They are in love, but no soppy stuff, lol.
Great job on a great book,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Hi Jacob,
This is a nice, proper ending for your saga. I like the way you tied up loose ends by having Danielle visit the prison and confront Mary. I like the description of what she looks like now, after having time to sit in prison. No lives to influence or control!!
Love the interaction between Callum and Danielle. They are in love, but no soppy stuff, lol.
Great job on a great book,
Rhonda
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Rhonda I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Thank you for following the book.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Wow What a great success for you. This might be ninety 93 chapter holy smokes, batman! Your dialogue is excellent paragraphs in between just enough. To satisfy and pique, the curiosity again excellent work! Let us celebrate, shall we? Let's celebrate by doing this final chapter.The honor it deserves! Thank you so much for doing all this work and sharing it with us. A really good job publish, I think that's a great idea! Thank you for your submission for all your effort and the wonderful way in what you've written in!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Wow What a great success for you. This might be ninety 93 chapter holy smokes, batman! Your dialogue is excellent paragraphs in between just enough. To satisfy and pique, the curiosity again excellent work! Let us celebrate, shall we? Let's celebrate by doing this final chapter.The honor it deserves! Thank you so much for doing all this work and sharing it with us. A really good job publish, I think that's a great idea! Thank you for your submission for all your effort and the wonderful way in what you've written in!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Lea, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it and thank you for the six stars. I'm hoping to start submitting to literary agents soon.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Jacob,
This was a fantastic finish to this book. The final chapter tied everything up and now Danielle and Callum can put the past behind him.
I have really enjoyed this book and I wish you the best of luck getting it published.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Jacob,
This was a fantastic finish to this book. The final chapter tied everything up and now Danielle and Callum can put the past behind him.
I have really enjoyed this book and I wish you the best of luck getting it published.
Cecilia
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Cecilia, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
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It was a great book. I'm sad it's done. Do you plan on writing another one?
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Yes, I will be posting a new book soon.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
That was a good ending. Danielle gets to face down Mary and prove she has a life to live that has nothing to do with Mary and that she if free to be happy. And Harvey is making a life for himself as well.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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That was a good ending. Danielle gets to face down Mary and prove she has a life to live that has nothing to do with Mary and that she if free to be happy. And Harvey is making a life for himself as well.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Carol, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
The doors are closed on the past and Mary is left to dwell on her illusions that sh masterminded it all and nothing would have happened if it wasn't for her. Behind bars in a prison doesn't seem like the place I'd want to be.... but Danille, Callum, Harvey, they all have a chance to find a new and better life. Very well written, Jacob. Can't wait to see what your next adventure will be.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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The doors are closed on the past and Mary is left to dwell on her illusions that sh masterminded it all and nothing would have happened if it wasn't for her. Behind bars in a prison doesn't seem like the place I'd want to be.... but Danille, Callum, Harvey, they all have a chance to find a new and better life. Very well written, Jacob. Can't wait to see what your next adventure will be.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Carol, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from lancellot
Good ending. I like that she went to the prison to speak to her. It fits with the personality we've been shown throughout. She can't just walk away and just let it go; she has to pick at whatever is needling her. But at the very end, she did, finally... walk away.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Good ending. I like that she went to the prison to speak to her. It fits with the personality we've been shown throughout. She can't just walk away and just let it go; she has to pick at whatever is needling her. But at the very end, she did, finally... walk away.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the six stars, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well done, Jacob, on completing your story with style and excellence. Your ends tied up neatly and I suppose she had to go and rub it in to Mary but I, certainly, wouldn't have visited the mad old crow!! This is definitely the best book you've written and I wish you well with it. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Well done, Jacob, on completing your story with style and excellence. Your ends tied up neatly and I suppose she had to go and rub it in to Mary but I, certainly, wouldn't have visited the mad old crow!! This is definitely the best book you've written and I wish you well with it. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Debbie, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It sounds as if Danielle and Callum are going to live life together to it's fullest. It also sounds like Harvey is continuing on with his life. I liked the ending. I'm happy to hear that Danielle chose to sell Raven House. That makes it all final.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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It sounds as if Danielle and Callum are going to live life together to it's fullest. It also sounds like Harvey is continuing on with his life. I liked the ending. I'm happy to hear that Danielle chose to sell Raven House. That makes it all final.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Barbara, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
