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His Silence

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Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?

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Comment from Begin Again
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Well, Jacob, it's been quite the journey, both with the story and your 200 posts! I congratulate you on both. It's been very enjoyable. You don't say that this is the conclusion but things are wrapping up it seems... good things coming from dark things. Harvey getting is freedom and seeing Danielle again...can they bond at family after all this? One never knows what curve balls life has to throw next. Great job!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
    Thank you, Carol, there's still one final chapter to go. I hope to post it later today.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Is this the conclusion? It sounds like one. I love the resolution of your plot. I'm glad you had Oliver reappear in the story. So, she inherits the Raven House. I see a sequel in that one, lol.

Congratulations on your book and on your 200th post!!

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
    Thank you, Rhonda, there's a couple more chapters to go.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Max is happy as he should be since he has a book deal out of it. Harvey will be released immediately, which is way past when he should have been free. And Oliver wishes he could have been her father and leaves her the house. (In England would it become a tourist destination like it would in the USA?)

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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What a great finish, Jacob, and on your 200th milestone! You've worked hard on this imaginative story and created many surprises along the way which have made the plot so compelling. I hope you can get this published now. A virtual six from me. Thank you for sharing. Take care Debbie

Hey, how's thing(s)?
It's like my brain(')s not functioning right

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
    Thank you, Debbie, there's still a couple more chapters to go.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Jacob,

What another fine chapter. I wonder what Danielle is going to do next. She now has that house to sell.

Congratulations on you 200th post. That's quite and accomplishment.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
    Thank you, Cecilia, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 04-Jan-2025
    You're welcome my friend
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Congratulations on your 200-milestone post. This is an excellent post to receive it on. I enjoyed reading. I am curious what you're going to post next. I do hope you go back to the previous story, it wasn't finished yet.

It's weird to think of him as my boyfriend now. (YEAH!!!!!!!!)

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
    Thank you Barbara, I'm actually writing a new draft of The Fix, so I'll be posting some new chapters soon. I've just got two more chapters left to post of His Silence before it's completed.
reply by barbara.wilkey on 04-Jan-2025
    You're doing a great job.