Humitree
A poem of creation, my word is create25 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wow, you come up with some wild words! The last few I had to reread it to get the meaning of where you were coming from as far as a manitree developing into girlitree and mate. This is a wonderful concept and worth developing into a novel or a short story. Even as poetry, it shines bright as the living light of the sun.
Jesse
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Wow, you come up with some wild words! The last few I had to reread it to get the meaning of where you were coming from as far as a manitree developing into girlitree and mate. This is a wonderful concept and worth developing into a novel or a short story. Even as poetry, it shines bright as the living light of the sun.
Jesse
Comment Written 26-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Yes, yes, I think you're right. I'm going to try and see what happens, and I will have you to thank for that! I appreciate all your kind words. And the great reviews you have been giving, and I believe the reader is most important in this operation. And that is you, your perspective, and the perspective of other readers is important, and it should be taken to note. Thank you again Jesse happy new year!
Comment from royowen
Occasionally I might open up these verbs etc and I love playing with these action words and write them into a very active poem, descriptively chewing the cud as it were, beautifully written Lea, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Occasionally I might open up these verbs etc and I love playing with these action words and write them into a very active poem, descriptively chewing the cud as it were, beautifully written Lea, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Thank you again.You're a fully smokes, batman! It seems there a bit of a hit.These mutant people let us carry on with them for a while and see what happens. Thank you so very much. I'm so happy to receive your review. Once again, a great writing, and again your time which is valuable. Hohoho!
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Well done
Comment from nomi338
This awesome entry illustrates the creativity possible to one who possesses the necessary skills. One question, how long did it take you to come up with the rhyming words? I tried to see if I could duplicate your great submission. I gave up after a few unproductive tries.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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This awesome entry illustrates the creativity possible to one who possesses the necessary skills. One question, how long did it take you to come up with the rhyming words? I tried to see if I could duplicate your great submission. I gave up after a few unproductive tries.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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How to use Google or thesaurus? And I'll pick words that rhyme and and if I don't understand the word, I'll see allah read up its meaning and if it fits, I'll use it. I'll say things to Google like rhymes. With tradition, and then it'll come up with all the words that rhyme with that, at least on the back end. It just seemed the way to go is just sort of fell into my head. I'm so happy you like this. Truly. I'm so happy to see your review too. I thank you also for your time. Especially christmas day.Your rating and your comments all great, thank you so much.And I hope that your new year is amazing too!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Lea
This is an interesting idea. Though it is an extension of Tolkien's Ents.
Great artwork that shows what they would look like. I like the mono-rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Merry Christmas.
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Hi Lea
This is an interesting idea. Though it is an extension of Tolkien's Ents.
Great artwork that shows what they would look like. I like the mono-rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Merry Christmas.
Joan
Comment Written 25-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Joan, thank you so much! I appreciate this, especially during the holiday when everyone's so busy. That you took the time to read.Great and write.Thank you again! I truly hope your holiday was great. Mm, that new year's will be even greater.I thank you again and I hope your night is great too!
Comment from Lana Marie
Oh that studly looking couple how they have a look of power to regenerate! I enjoyed all the rhymes that you used to generate your rhyming poem! This is great!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Oh that studly looking couple how they have a look of power to regenerate! I enjoyed all the rhymes that you used to generate your rhyming poem! This is great!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Lana, thank you so much. I appreciate your review and I appreciate you. Taking the time to read to write and to rate, especially during the holiday! I'm super glad you liked them, and please. That you do, and I hope that you're holiday was great, and that new year's will be even greater.Thank you again!
Comment from kahpot
"Manitree, Girlitree fate
radiate"
i really like this line, yes, we should celebrate and be very happy that we have the opportunity to be here, as before, you certainly have wonderful imagination and creativity, an excellent read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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"Manitree, Girlitree fate
radiate"
i really like this line, yes, we should celebrate and be very happy that we have the opportunity to be here, as before, you certainly have wonderful imagination and creativity, an excellent read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Thank you. I'm so pleased you like them. And that you have supported me along the way. I am very much appreciated.And I do notice not something I shall easily forget. Your comments are always uplifting, kind and insightful. I'm happy to receive that to, especially during the holiday, when everyone's so busy. Your time 2 is valuable, that's awesome. Thank you so much.Have a great night!
Comment from Begin Again
I'm not a poet, nor am I a sci-fi fan, but what I am - is a writer who likes to dig deep into the mind and find something different and filled with creativity. You've done that ten-fold with this series of poems. Awesome!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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I'm not a poet, nor am I a sci-fi fan, but what I am - is a writer who likes to dig deep into the mind and find something different and filled with creativity. You've done that ten-fold with this series of poems. Awesome!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Thank you, carol, that's really great of you to say that I appreciate it very much! I shall continue with this species of tree and human. Let's see where it leads continue, making pictures and put it out there and your comments encourage me.Thank you very much! I hope that you're ready for your holiday and that it's wonderful for you and yours!
Comment from Tim Margetts
I really am enjoying this series, Lea.
This poem is excellent in the way it plays with a single rhyme throughout.
Though you did forget the Dr's rhyme... exterminate
Tim x
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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I really am enjoying this series, Lea.
This poem is excellent in the way it plays with a single rhyme throughout.
Though you did forget the Dr's rhyme... exterminate
Tim x
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Lol.... Thank you, Tim. ISO appreciate you and your review truely. I'm very happy to receive them! I always like your comments. They're very insightful, because you see exactly what i'm writing about, no question. A mark of a true writer and also the reader being the most important for their opinions and comments thank you for those too! I hope your day is great.And your holidays even greater!
Comment from DonandVicki
Your poem did for me what all good poetry should do and that is; open and expand the readers mind. I get the word create in your poem and enjoyed the moving experience.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Your poem did for me what all good poetry should do and that is; open and expand the readers mind. I get the word create in your poem and enjoyed the moving experience.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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That's awesome.What a fine complimentI really appreciate that! Best of all, you like it for which i'm pleased. I'm always mindful of a person's time as well as to read it. And I think the time to think about it and offer comments and send that in so that too is valuable. I hope you have a most amazing holiday that you get everything you want and need. That you and yours are healthy, and you have an amazing night ho.Ho ho all that good stuff!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great One Word Base Poem. This is science fiction to the hilt. To think trees and humans can recreate is bizarre. I guess in a sci-fi any thing is possible.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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This is a great One Word Base Poem. This is science fiction to the hilt. To think trees and humans can recreate is bizarre. I guess in a sci-fi any thing is possible.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you again, Cecilia. I'm glad this is entertaining. It's entertained me so far as far as imagining it and making the art and writing the words.It's been a great process, thinking about a story. Appreciate your comments and hanging out here with me again, ho.Ho ho!
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You're welcome