The Meld
Strange life beyond man20 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Your creativity in writing the poetry and in drawing the sci-fi picture of man/tree is amazing ...you are exploding with this new idea. Wishing you well as you continue to share your creativity with the reader.
Merry Christmas...
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Your creativity in writing the poetry and in drawing the sci-fi picture of man/tree is amazing ...you are exploding with this new idea. Wishing you well as you continue to share your creativity with the reader.
Merry Christmas...
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you. Too ho ho ho ho, that good stuff! Thank you again you're very kind. Enjoy your time with your family.I hope it's wonderful and great for all of you! Thank you again!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
another one if your series of Sci-Fi poems. You should put them into a book and share here or publish them on Substack or elsewhere. I liked the two previous poems you wrote
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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another one if your series of Sci-Fi poems. You should put them into a book and share here or publish them on Substack or elsewhere. I liked the two previous poems you wrote
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Jake, that's really kind of you to say, and i've seen the other two here as well for which I will respond. Yes, I have considered doing that. Actually, and I seem to be forming a story, I think we can expand on that. You're thinking along the same lines as me ho.Ho ho. Text jake for this great review and for your rating and your time watch out for your roofs and range your show up they're not light! Lol
Comment from Sugarray77
Very creative and I really appreciate your talent in grabbing a nebulous thought and crystalizing it into an amazing poem. Well done and thanks for the notes... they really helped add depth and resonance to your meaning.
Melissa
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Very creative and I really appreciate your talent in grabbing a nebulous thought and crystalizing it into an amazing poem. Well done and thanks for the notes... they really helped add depth and resonance to your meaning.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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That's so awesome. Thank you so very much for your comments.I'm very kind too I must say! I'm always happy and glad when one of the readers out there in the world says they like it. And your time's valuable too. And I thank you for that as well.I hope that you and yours have an amazing holiday and your night's great too, so ho ho ho!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. I like this idea you have come up with. It is actually no stranger than some of the things happening in reality these days. Possibly these creatures are what are flying the drones over the cities.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. I like this idea you have come up with. It is actually no stranger than some of the things happening in reality these days. Possibly these creatures are what are flying the drones over the cities.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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That's an interesting idea! One could expand on that for sure! It tis the season to be jolly it's certainly turning out to be one! I thank you again.
And you're dedication in reading is very complimentary, and I thank you for that too! May the force be with you?Can the big guy come down your chimney!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Lea,
This is a great 5-7-5 poem. You are very creative in your thought process in putting this poem together. To think acid rain would make chromosomes change to something else.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Lea,
This is a great 5-7-5 poem. You are very creative in your thought process in putting this poem together. To think acid rain would make chromosomes change to something else.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Awesome thank you Cecilia! I'm thinking of carrying on with this little series and see what happens. I'm glad you appreciate my poem and artwork. It's so very complimentary.Thank you very much.Have a happy holiday and good night!
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You're welcome
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your poem presented a terrific image of a potential disaster as man continued to experiment with the unimaginable. Well done, dear Lea for sharing your very creative work, a warning to mankind. Remain blessed.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Your poem presented a terrific image of a potential disaster as man continued to experiment with the unimaginable. Well done, dear Lea for sharing your very creative work, a warning to mankind. Remain blessed.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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WowThat's very kind comment you've given.Thank you very much! Best of all you like it! Who could ask for more? Thank you for your great rating.And your time as well, which is important.People are busy these days. Something and I might carry on with this kind of oh, I'm gonna make it into a story of sorts. Yeah, I think so. Thank you very much again, please. Enjoy your holiday. I hope you're having a great night and ho.Ho ho!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Very provocative concept - a potential outcome when we ignore our environment and leave room for tumultuous and irreversible changes. It's a warning that gives one great pause for thought.
Love the artwork you created, Miss Talent!!
Good luck in the xontest!!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Very provocative concept - a potential outcome when we ignore our environment and leave room for tumultuous and irreversible changes. It's a warning that gives one great pause for thought.
Love the artwork you created, Miss Talent!!
Good luck in the xontest!!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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I'm glad you like the pictures. I'm kinda liking how they're turning out too. And once again, you grace me with another wonderful rating and great comments and best of all your time, valuable to me. Happy holidays to you. Happy holidays to your husband your lovely daughter learn you cute doggies too!
Comment from DonandVicki
I'm glad that you included the authors notes, although, after my first reading, I could see the evil forces of man made disasters changing reality. Good short poem.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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I'm glad that you included the authors notes, although, after my first reading, I could see the evil forces of man made disasters changing reality. Good short poem.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Excellent insight thank you very much! So glad you found it interesting. It's definitely a more how I say abstract the most for sure, the car, to put it out there with only so much space that you're allowed within this contest. What you have given me find review and a fine rating for which I appreciate.And I hope that you're having amazing holiday, and that your night's great to thanks again!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You have really put extra creativity into this one, Lea as you show us the scary what ifs - if the wierd meld with the pollutants and then we get the Manitree. I love your artwork too, well done with both words and art.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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You have really put extra creativity into this one, Lea as you show us the scary what ifs - if the wierd meld with the pollutants and then we get the Manitree. I love your artwork too, well done with both words and art.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you Valda the once again! Yeah, I mean, I've been playing with my art tools for a while and coming up with these funky little things. And I thought, wouldn't it be cool if we actually had a genetic melding with a plant. I made the
the picture to suit the story. Thank you once again. I'm super glad you like this one too. It was definitely different step out. I hope you have an amazing day!
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and is very creative. Thank you so much for giving us your notes of what the meaning of this poem is. I enjoyed listening to it and I wish you the very best for the holidays. May you have a blessed and merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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This is very well written and is very creative. Thank you so much for giving us your notes of what the meaning of this poem is. I enjoyed listening to it and I wish you the very best for the holidays. May you have a blessed and merry Christmas.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much. I hope you do too.And we have a little bit of peace this year! I thank you 2 for your awesome review, and you're fine rating and your kind comets. Always appreciated truly. I wish you a wonderful holiday as well. That your family and you get everything you wish for!