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His Silence

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Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?

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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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It is about time she told Callum about speaking with Ian. Callum doesn't seem too upset after she explains her reasons for talking to him. Eve is going to turn against her after she realizes how close the two are.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Well Callum seems a little more amenable today. Yesterday, he seemed decidedly brain-washed. Max should hurry up now digging for info. And what about Danielle reassuring her adoptive parents she's still alive? I worry about that:) But another great, error-free read. Thanks for sharing, Jacob! Debbie

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I'm not sure telling Callum this is a good thing. I'm worried about how brain washed he already is. Especially right after this conversation he's having an exercise with Mary. That might not be good. I do like this story a lot.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Jacob,

So glad to see you back. I've been missing Danielle's saga. If I were her I would be careful what she tells Callum. It almost seems like he is working for the other side.

Another fine chapter where you have left me on the edge wanting more.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Cecilia, I'm pleased that you're enjoying it.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 23-Nov-2024
    Jacob,

    You're welcome

    Cecilia
Comment from BethShelby
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I hope Collum doesn't tell Mary about what Danielle told him. I'm afreaid she is getting to him. They need both leave this place bug I guess that would mess up your story. I was glad to see a post this morning.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
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I hope Collum doesn't tell Mary about what Danielle told him. I'm afreaid she is getting to him. They need both leave this place bug I guess that would mess up your story. I was glad to see a post this morning.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Beth.
Comment from Begin Again
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Good one, Jacob! I'm on the fence trying to decide if Callum has switched sides or whether he's trying to decide himself. I think he is being brainwashed and his mind switches between Danielle and Grace. Keep us going!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it. The story is beginning to near the end now.