Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Miracles - chap 9"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
Hey great description of a whirling mind i don't know As Rebecca left Phillip Henderson's office, she felt like she'd stepped into another life -- someone else's. Her mind swirled as she tried to understand what had just happened. The words "Angela Giordano," "twin sister," and "inheritance" were bouncing through her mind like a pinball machine. Good job.
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Hey great description of a whirling mind i don't know As Rebecca left Phillip Henderson's office, she felt like she'd stepped into another life -- someone else's. Her mind swirled as she tried to understand what had just happened. The words "Angela Giordano," "twin sister," and "inheritance" were bouncing through her mind like a pinball machine. Good job.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I've always thought it would be terrible to find out you were adopted and it had been kept from you, but you are creating a good story around that fact, Carol. A great chapter.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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I've always thought it would be terrible to find out you were adopted and it had been kept from you, but you are creating a good story around that fact, Carol. A great chapter.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Excuse the cut and paste...
I'm traveling to North Carolina to spend some time with my Great Granddaughters (and enjoy Keyanna's national soccer tournament). It's like a whirlwind at the moment, but I do appreciate your time and especially your enjoyment of my story. Hope to get back to it soon. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
It's so good to see Garth rejoin the land of the living. His reluctance to imagine the possibility of a new love is understandable and the interplay between him and Rebecca rings true. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for this budding relationship!
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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It's so good to see Garth rejoin the land of the living. His reluctance to imagine the possibility of a new love is understandable and the interplay between him and Rebecca rings true. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for this budding relationship!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Yes, I was happy to see Garth making a move to reach out to Rebecca, but his life is going to get shook up and turned around as we continue down the road. He better hang on to that Stetson or it might get lost in the wind.
Smiles, Carol
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Go easy on my Garth...
(Giggle)
Comment from Julie Helms
So now I'm wondering if Allie and Alyssa are the same person...
This was a lovely upbeat chapter. A perfect interlude between intense scenes!
If you are interested in getting your italics the same size font as the regular print, you just make them one size smaller. So if your story is 18pt and you make your italics 16pt, they'll match. Weird glitch on this site.
Excellent chapter! I have 3 more to catch up on because someone has been a busy bee!
Julie
:-)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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So now I'm wondering if Allie and Alyssa are the same person...
This was a lovely upbeat chapter. A perfect interlude between intense scenes!
If you are interested in getting your italics the same size font as the regular print, you just make them one size smaller. So if your story is 18pt and you make your italics 16pt, they'll match. Weird glitch on this site.
Excellent chapter! I have 3 more to catch up on because someone has been a busy bee!
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Excuse the cut and paste...
I'm traveling to North Carolina to spend some time with my Great Granddaughters (and enjoy Keyanna's national soccer tournament). It's like a whirlwind at the moment, but I do appreciate your time and especially your enjoyment of my story. Hope to get back to it soon. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from marilyn quillen
i feel like a kid in a candy store, i have so much to read. I'm having a blast. I really should be writing, I haven't written a wordfor a week nowand I usually write a story a week. Oh well, it Christmas crafting time
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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i feel like a kid in a candy store, i have so much to read. I'm having a blast. I really should be writing, I haven't written a wordfor a week nowand I usually write a story a week. Oh well, it Christmas crafting time
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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i am so far behind and I apologize. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. I do so appreciate it and all the support.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Two good things, the obstinate Donatelli, trying to make out he doesn't need anyone, while all the time he does, and then later, Garth being drawn to Rebecca, and some similarities she has to Allie, is he falling in love?, well done, Carol, great episode, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Two good things, the obstinate Donatelli, trying to make out he doesn't need anyone, while all the time he does, and then later, Garth being drawn to Rebecca, and some similarities she has to Allie, is he falling in love?, well done, Carol, great episode, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Good morning, Roy. Hope you are doing well. Thanks for reading another chapter and for enjoying what's happening. Thing are really starting to boil now.
Smiles, Carol
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Yep they are
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yep, it kind of like the motto I've always lived by, like in an old Stephen Stills song: "If you can't be with the one you love; love the one you're with.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Yep, it kind of like the motto I've always lived by, like in an old Stephen Stills song: "If you can't be with the one you love; love the one you're with.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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And love makes the world go round.... And of course you started my early morning off with sunshine and stars...awesome! Thanks so much for being there for me and for enjoying what I write.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
I certainly hope that Garth is not falling for Rebecca, just because she reminds him of Allie. He will break Rebecca's heart ten fold. I should know, I have been Rebecca once and it hurt like hell when my then long time partner realised I was not his lost love.
It's a great story what with finding out Jenna was adopted. I can relate, I was adopted, finding my real family more than twenty years ago.
But on to your story. I so enjoy it. Hugs, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I certainly hope that Garth is not falling for Rebecca, just because she reminds him of Allie. He will break Rebecca's heart ten fold. I should know, I have been Rebecca once and it hurt like hell when my then long time partner realised I was not his lost love.
It's a great story what with finding out Jenna was adopted. I can relate, I was adopted, finding my real family more than twenty years ago.
But on to your story. I so enjoy it. Hugs, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Oh, Ulla, you are so kind. I am thrilled that you are enjoying this story. Garth will have a struggle at first but I think his heart will find the truth. i can't imagine the pain of someone walking away when you thought you were committed. Rebecca is in for a lot of surprises. Thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Yes it is possible, I did it. Love is not something that you can order on line, it's a clash of so many things that add up to that wonderful feeling of being in love again. It doesn't mean the first love is being betrayed, in fact, some would say the deceased loved one has a hand in the meeting. This is a great chapter, my friend. I am so sorry I ran out of sixes before I realised I'd used them all. Please forgive me, this, as well as all your writing, is six star material. Love you lots, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Yes it is possible, I did it. Love is not something that you can order on line, it's a clash of so many things that add up to that wonderful feeling of being in love again. It doesn't mean the first love is being betrayed, in fact, some would say the deceased loved one has a hand in the meeting. This is a great chapter, my friend. I am so sorry I ran out of sixes before I realised I'd used them all. Please forgive me, this, as well as all your writing, is six star material. Love you lots, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I do believe that the deceased would want you to be happy and enjoy life and might have a hand in arranging it. Garth is struggling to make that decision but I think he will come to understand.
As for the six, it's not a problem. Just knowing you are enjoying is enough for me. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Smiles and love, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
Another excellent chapter in your book, Carol, you kept me engaged right the way through and I thought your dialogue was brilliant as always. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Another excellent chapter in your book, Carol, you kept me engaged right the way through and I thought your dialogue was brilliant as always. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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You are so kind and of course, I am so appreciative...great for my ego. LOL Thank you so much for enjoying the chapter and I hope you continue to be spellbound by the developments.
Smiles, Carol