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Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Bill's Version"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from lyenochka
Well, I'm glad you got your truck back. You made it sound like a hotel no one wants to go to! And I wouldn't have scattered off upon seeing you! You know I'd want to chat with "Santa Claus" about his sea worm suit.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Well, I'm glad you got your truck back. You made it sound like a hotel no one wants to go to! And I wouldn't have scattered off upon seeing you! You know I'd want to chat with "Santa Claus" about his sea worm suit.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I didn't know what I would say to you, and I didn't want to be cheeky.
Comment from judiverse
This is fun. I think the highlight is the "valet" who demanded $100. Love the money Bill had. At least he got his truck back in one piece, although he'll have to clean up the grape stain. You introduced several of the attendees with fun comments. Very delightful. judi
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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This is fun. I think the highlight is the "valet" who demanded $100. Love the money Bill had. At least he got his truck back in one piece, although he'll have to clean up the grape stain. You introduced several of the attendees with fun comments. Very delightful. judi
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Judi.
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You're welcome. Great story. judi
Comment from Wendy G
Very well done - loved the humour you have presented here. Your account of the events is different and unique, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done. A great addition to the others.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Very well done - loved the humour you have presented here. Your account of the events is different and unique, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done. A great addition to the others.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Wendy.
Comment from jim vecchio
Sound like the Fanstory get-together took place in Green Acres. So sad about your razor. Mine had an affair with a cootie. They're just not faithful, those razors. Other than that, seemed like everything was about normal at the party.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Sound like the Fanstory get-together took place in Green Acres. So sad about your razor. Mine had an affair with a cootie. They're just not faithful, those razors. Other than that, seemed like everything was about normal at the party.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I've replaced the razor with a comb.
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These days, my comb doesn't have so much work to do.
Comment from BethShelby
LOL, I love your version. I thought that truck was gone forever. You don't seem concerned about the non-existent cover charge the rest of us didn't pay. I would never have recognized you without your seaworm persona. It doesn't sound like you hung around long. I guess the food wasn't that good after having people's faces in it.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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LOL, I love your version. I thought that truck was gone forever. You don't seem concerned about the non-existent cover charge the rest of us didn't pay. I would never have recognized you without your seaworm persona. It doesn't sound like you hung around long. I guess the food wasn't that good after having people's faces in it.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I didn't notice the October 31 deadline until it was November.
Comment from BethShelby
LOL, I love your version. I thought that truck was gone forever. You don't seem concerned about the non-existent cover charge the rest of us didn't pay. I would never have recognized you without your seaworm persona. It doesn't sound like you hung around long. I guess the food wasn't that good after having people's faces in it.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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LOL, I love your version. I thought that truck was gone forever. You don't seem concerned about the non-existent cover charge the rest of us didn't pay. I would never have recognized you without your seaworm persona. It doesn't sound like you hung around long. I guess the food wasn't that good after having people's faces in it.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I didn't notice the October 31 deadline until it was November.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is hilarious Bill and I am glad you joined in the fun here with your version. I was splitting my sides laughing at your inventive post which is so entertaining and I am so glad I had one six left to award you for this post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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This is hilarious Bill and I am glad you joined in the fun here with your version. I was splitting my sides laughing at your inventive post which is so entertaining and I am so glad I had one six left to award you for this post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Dolly. I was late to the party.
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At least you came x x x