Blinded By Love
When did his love really leave?11 total reviews
Comment from Carol Clark2
Beautiful picture, but a sad flash story. He left her on their wedding day??? How cruel! And sent her a letter to tell her??? Double cruel! I like the description of their long chats and passionate kisses. Well written story!
Blessings. Carol
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Beautiful picture, but a sad flash story. He left her on their wedding day??? How cruel! And sent her a letter to tell her??? Double cruel! I like the description of their long chats and passionate kisses. Well written story!
Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
Comment from zanya
Yes -this 50 word Flash packs a punch with its sad tale of a broken and disappointed heart and a disappointed bride - sadly these tragic events happen
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Yes -this 50 word Flash packs a punch with its sad tale of a broken and disappointed heart and a disappointed bride - sadly these tragic events happen
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
Comment from karenina
She's better off without him, but only time will teach her that. If he betrayed her with a note, not caring is her first step in healing --
Sad little fifty-word flash that reminds us not all that glitters is gold...
Some is "fool's" gold.
Great photo for your story, as well.
Karenina
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She's better off without him, but only time will teach her that. If he betrayed her with a note, not caring is her first step in healing --
Sad little fifty-word flash that reminds us not all that glitters is gold...
Some is "fool's" gold.
Great photo for your story, as well.
Karenina
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
Comment from royowen
I often wonder how many poor souls have been destroyed by betrayal, or in fact have been shaped by that betrayal, I think I have by a source I once depended on, but it shaped me, it made me stronger by allowing it to shape me, not destroy me, beautifully written Carol. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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I often wonder how many poor souls have been destroyed by betrayal, or in fact have been shaped by that betrayal, I think I have by a source I once depended on, but it shaped me, it made me stronger by allowing it to shape me, not destroy me, beautifully written Carol. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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I realize that feelings can change and you might feel differently about someone, but at least talk to them, don't be a coward and send a letter. I can't imagine anything more despicable. thanks for the review, Roy!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Carol. Nice short story. I like your description of passionate kisses in the moonlight. It would be nice if love stayed that way. Well written. Great job.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Hi Carol. Nice short story. I like your description of passionate kisses in the moonlight. It would be nice if love stayed that way. Well written. Great job.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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I was fortunate to have shared moments like that until I husband passed. Now I couldn't even imagine being the same way with anyone else...besides I am too old to bother. I just write and wait until we meet again.
Smiles, Carol
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That's wonderful!
Comment from patcelaw
You may have had fun writing it, but I'm sure she did not feel fun at that time. I am sure most women would be very devastated if they really thought the man cared and loved them to be so cruelly Left at the altar
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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You may have had fun writing it, but I'm sure she did not feel fun at that time. I am sure most women would be very devastated if they really thought the man cared and loved them to be so cruelly Left at the altar
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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I so agree. Another FS writer said that something like this had happened to someone else. I thought it was devastating. What a coward to send a letter and not tell her to her face. I hope katma bites back!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Distinguishing from fraud or real can sometimes be a difficult task. An evil heart's true intentions and feelings hidden deep within, as a gifted liar and accomplished wordsmith weaves deceit. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Distinguishing from fraud or real can sometimes be a difficult task. An evil heart's true intentions and feelings hidden deep within, as a gifted liar and accomplished wordsmith weaves deceit. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Aren't yo weaving a good story within your reviews. Testing my brain power, making sure they aren't totally short circuited. LOL Making me smile and that's what counts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Teri7
Carol, This is a really great 50 word flash story you have penned. You used great descriptive words that went so well with the amazing artwork you chose to use. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Carol, This is a really great 50 word flash story you have penned. You used great descriptive words that went so well with the amazing artwork you chose to use. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much, Teri. I might write a few of these to get out of the heavy dark stuff I've been writing. Easy simple writes and fun. Quick reads for everyone too.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm glad you had fun writing this because I had fun reading it. My mind wondered who how many times this must happen in the world. I would love to believe it doesn't, but that's fantasy. Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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I'm glad you had fun writing this because I had fun reading it. My mind wondered who how many times this must happen in the world. I would love to believe it doesn't, but that's fantasy. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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thanks, Barbara. Helen told me it has actually happened to a young person on FS. I can't imagine someone being so heartless and cowardly to send a letter to someone they once professed to love. I know life changes but still.... the world spins on a dime!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I loved this fifty word flash, Carol. They aren't easy to write and you did great. Too bad there wasn't a contest to put it in. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day.
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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I loved this fifty word flash, Carol. They aren't easy to write and you did great. Too bad there wasn't a contest to put it in. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day.
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thanks Marilyn... I can't imagine someone who has professed to love someone forever and sends a DEar GirlFried letter. What a coward! And I would hope karma would come back to bite him.
Smiles, Carol