Spirited Justice
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Spirited Justice - THE END"Mystery, crime and ghostly high jinks
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Comment from lancellot
Well, the length wasn't an issue for me. You had lots of threads to tie off and that interrogation needed to happen so the fact, information and leads could happen. I do wonder why Allie doesn't simply come back, if Danni and Eleanor could. Death doesn't have much meaning.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Well, the length wasn't an issue for me. You had lots of threads to tie off and that interrogation needed to happen so the fact, information and leads could happen. I do wonder why Allie doesn't simply come back, if Danni and Eleanor could. Death doesn't have much meaning.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much Lance. I figured having two ghosts in the book was enough and the storyline I have figured out for the third book can't have Allie existing anymore. I appreciate the time and comments you put into this chapter. Thank you very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Aw, that was a great ending to the story, Carol, and you set it up well for the next book in the series. It's so true what Eleanor was saying. There's always a new begining, but that doesn't mean that you forget. Hugs, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Aw, that was a great ending to the story, Carol, and you set it up well for the next book in the series. It's so true what Eleanor was saying. There's always a new begining, but that doesn't mean that you forget. Hugs, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much, Ull;a. I hated to wrap it up but there will be another one and hopefully all our friends will be back. I appreciate your kindness and your support.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Just the way I like good stories to end, with reason to carry on, and a hint at what might be coming next. LOL. It's always a pleasure and I can hardly waiting for book three to begin. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Just the way I like good stories to end, with reason to carry on, and a hint at what might be coming next. LOL. It's always a pleasure and I can hardly waiting for book three to begin. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Yo are so sweet! I am very proud of how this story turned out and I am looking forward to writing the next one. I lost a lot of followers so I think I'll have to step up the third book somehow. I believe there will be more personal revelations concerning the mai characters.... Thank you so much for always supporting me.
Hope you have a wonderful week.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was fantastic! I love how you finish it, but don't. You now have us waiting for the next book and Garth chasing William. That was so darned clever. I'm a bit worried though; Eleanor said she has to go back to Charles. Does that mean no more Eleanor? Now that Matthew and Jenna have actually got together, they will be happy now. So, we will be flying off to Rothenburg now?
I have loved this story, the characters, and the amazing ghosts from the first book through now to the coming third one. Very well done, my clever friend. You have ended this one perfectly. Loved it!! Love you, my very clever friend. :)) Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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That was fantastic! I love how you finish it, but don't. You now have us waiting for the next book and Garth chasing William. That was so darned clever. I'm a bit worried though; Eleanor said she has to go back to Charles. Does that mean no more Eleanor? Now that Matthew and Jenna have actually got together, they will be happy now. So, we will be flying off to Rothenburg now?
I have loved this story, the characters, and the amazing ghosts from the first book through now to the coming third one. Very well done, my clever friend. You have ended this one perfectly. Loved it!! Love you, my very clever friend. :)) Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much! I couldn't wait for you to read this. And not to worry because there will be an Eleanor...that's the reason I write them. I love her! The next book will involve a lot of personal life (like the first one) and it will be emotional as well as dramatic. Or so I think. Thank you for all your continued support and for being by my side all the time. I couldn't ask for more.
Smiles, hugs, and love, Carol
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You are so welcome. I looked this morning for this chapter, and I couldn't find it. And you posted it yesterday when I was fast asleep! I didn't go back looking in my messages because I was expecting it to be close to the top of them. So I waited, and waited, and it was there all the time! DUH, teach me not to check it out properly. 😂🥰🥰
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Not a problem and now it is late there and I was so worried that you wouldn't read until tomorrow. Thank you again and sweet dreams. Love you, Carol
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When I read your message, I could not have gone to bed without reading it. Yes, I'm off up the wooden hill now. Night night, my friend. xxxx
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Hugs!!!!!
Comment from karenina
Congratulations my friend~ Another one is in the books. (Oh, that was a silly pun!)
You've kept the perfect balance of some closure...a budding romance...and
unfinished business.
A very satisfying place to end.
(Cue the fireworks!)
I'll miss Eleanor, but I'm happy she will be back with her spiritual twinkle in November!
Bravo...
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Congratulations my friend~ Another one is in the books. (Oh, that was a silly pun!)
You've kept the perfect balance of some closure...a budding romance...and
unfinished business.
A very satisfying place to end.
(Cue the fireworks!)
I'll miss Eleanor, but I'm happy she will be back with her spiritual twinkle in November!
Bravo...
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Harenina
I appreciate that you read the chapters and caught up. I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did writing it...especially Eleanor. I appreciate your time and comments.
Smiles, Carol
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As you know I'm long-winded and could have gone on for paragraphs more with each chapter's review! I promise you, I read every single word and appreciate you more each day as a wonderful human and authoress!
Comment from royowen
Well done, I've enjoyed the ride Carol, where to from here, perhaps Garth's trip to Rothenburg, and tango enjoying the German beer there. This has been a great journey Carol, you must be a little sad that it's over for now, I enjoyed the journey, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Well done, I've enjoyed the ride Carol, where to from here, perhaps Garth's trip to Rothenburg, and tango enjoying the German beer there. This has been a great journey Carol, you must be a little sad that it's over for now, I enjoyed the journey, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Yes, it was tough ending it. Eleanor has made me laugh so much and I really enjoyed her antics. But I will write another one come NOvember - I believe they are having another book contest. And I've been thinking of a few short things to occupy my time for a few weeks. Thank you for enjoying the story and for sticking with me throughout. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
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My pleasure Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
This was an excellent end to your book, Carol. It really can be frustrating for investigators having to deal with different jurisdictions, I think it's, sadly, what makes it so easy for criminals to move around so freely and leaving them able to escape prosecution. This was a really exciting read and I loved how you ended it with Jenna and Donatteli. I'm wondering if whether or not this will be the last we see of Eleanor. You could definitely write some short stories about her, perhaps she could help out in other cases as well. An excellent chapter, Carol. I can't wait to read what you write next.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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This was an excellent end to your book, Carol. It really can be frustrating for investigators having to deal with different jurisdictions, I think it's, sadly, what makes it so easy for criminals to move around so freely and leaving them able to escape prosecution. This was a really exciting read and I loved how you ended it with Jenna and Donatteli. I'm wondering if whether or not this will be the last we see of Eleanor. You could definitely write some short stories about her, perhaps she could help out in other cases as well. An excellent chapter, Carol. I can't wait to read what you write next.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thank you Jacob for the great review and the stars. I have loved writing this story ing involved with the characters. I believe I will stop for a couple weeks with this series and then write another one with the same characters. I love the ghosts and their antics. Thanks again.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So, Garth goes to Germany. I can't wait to see what happens there.
Donatelli laughed, "That's what he calls cooling off -- breaking someone." (laughed.)
Henry looked down at his hands, shaking his head. (Henry studied his hands. Is a lot stronger statement.)
Garth chuckled, "I make no promises, but I'll try to keep it civil." (chuckled.)
To what do I owe this--an unannounced visit?" ("To)
His voice was low, almost a whisper. "Dance with me?" (whisper,)
I know, but she's always with you, Garth." Eleanor patted his chest. "She's always in your heart." ("I)
e stared at the sky for a few more moments and whispered "I love you" to his angel in the sky, and then dialed Tango's number. (whispered,)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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So, Garth goes to Germany. I can't wait to see what happens there.
Donatelli laughed, "That's what he calls cooling off -- breaking someone." (laughed.)
Henry looked down at his hands, shaking his head. (Henry studied his hands. Is a lot stronger statement.)
Garth chuckled, "I make no promises, but I'll try to keep it civil." (chuckled.)
To what do I owe this--an unannounced visit?" ("To)
His voice was low, almost a whisper. "Dance with me?" (whisper,)
I know, but she's always with you, Garth." Eleanor patted his chest. "She's always in your heart." ("I)
e stared at the sky for a few more moments and whispered "I love you" to his angel in the sky, and then dialed Tango's number. (whispered,)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thanks for taking your time to collect the periods and commas for me. I have made the corrections. Sorry if the ending chapter was a let down for you. Hopefully, when we get to the next book you will enjoy it more. Appreciate your time and effort.
Smiles, Carol
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I figured there would be another chapter because we haven't captured William yet.
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William won't be captured....he has slipped away for now. Some times the bad guys out smart the good guys ....even Garth. LOL
Comment from Wendy G
Like the touch of the fireworks and Donatelli and Jenna being to gether, as well as Naomi and Angelo. Garth needs not only to now catch Wlliam but needs a new love interest - not to replace Allie, but, as you say, to add another layer of love. Congratulations on another book completed.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Like the touch of the fireworks and Donatelli and Jenna being to gether, as well as Naomi and Angelo. Garth needs not only to now catch Wlliam but needs a new love interest - not to replace Allie, but, as you say, to add another layer of love. Congratulations on another book completed.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much Wendy. I am thrilled that you have read the entire book and enjoyed it. Thank you so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Congratulations on finishing another book, Carol! And you brought out all your endearing characters. Finally, Donatelli has moved on. Naomi has Angelo. And Garth has a villain to catch with Eleanor always nearby to call.
I was surprised that Garth thanked Danni for the coffee in the investigation room. Was she visible? If so, Bryce and Henry should have been much more frightened!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Congratulations on finishing another book, Carol! And you brought out all your endearing characters. Finally, Donatelli has moved on. Naomi has Angelo. And Garth has a villain to catch with Eleanor always nearby to call.
I was surprised that Garth thanked Danni for the coffee in the investigation room. Was she visible? If so, Bryce and Henry should have been much more frightened!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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First of all, thank you for reading, enjoying, and blessing me with your stars. I am beyond thrilled that yu enjoyed it. And thank you for catching that oops with Danni. You were so right! I scratched it from the scene.
Smiles and hugs, Carol