Spirited Justice
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Comment from BethShelby
This was very chilling chapter. Those men are determined to get the papers no matter who they have to kill. It's good thing Danni was listening and got Donnatelli involved.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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This was very chilling chapter. Those men are determined to get the papers no matter who they have to kill. It's good thing Danni was listening and got Donnatelli involved.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Yes, the bad guys don't want to fail but now that we can get Garth and Donatelli on the same team, we might be able to wrap this case up. I say might because you know how I like to throw in curve balls all the time. LOL Thanks again, Beth.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Patti is definitely between a rock and a hard place. She really wants to live but stealing from Hilda can be dangerous for Hilda and what will the bad guys do with the information? Do they want to be sure there is no cure for cancer?
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Patti is definitely between a rock and a hard place. She really wants to live but stealing from Hilda can be dangerous for Hilda and what will the bad guys do with the information? Do they want to be sure there is no cure for cancer?
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Yes...they fear that they will lose billions of dollars on unnecessary medicines and procedures if the cancer is cured. Greed is their motivation. Thanks so much as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
I loved the tension right at the end, Carol, particularly the fear that really comes through in Patti's dialogue. You really kept me gripped right the way through. I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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I loved the tension right at the end, Carol, particularly the fear that really comes through in Patti's dialogue. You really kept me gripped right the way through. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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That girl should be scared! She thinks she's better than everyone, but if those crooks had their hands on her...she can lose her life just like anyone else. Thanks so much for all the reviews.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
They say we write what we know, but of course, what we know sometimes needs to be ramped up a little. But that never means we don't know more about what we are writing about than we're willing to let be known. LOL.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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They say we write what we know, but of course, what we know sometimes needs to be ramped up a little. But that never means we don't know more about what we are writing about than we're willing to let be known. LOL.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Truth be known I am a ghost in training and Eleanor is my mentor! LOL And for having lived on the dark side of life...hmmm I can't not speak or I might end up with the fishes, LOl Thank you so much for the lovely words and the chuckle that went with it.
Smiles, Carol
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Yes, those with vocabularies so big, and emotions so deep, didn't just get them from reading. Otherwise we would have put the books away a long time ago.
Comment from Carol Clark2
Good dialogue between Patti and Hilda, to move the story forward. Patti seems caught by Donatelli. I hope he can get her to talk about her plans for the research papers. Good chapter! Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Good dialogue between Patti and Hilda, to move the story forward. Patti seems caught by Donatelli. I hope he can get her to talk about her plans for the research papers. Good chapter! Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Almost being kidnapped by those thugs shoul have taught her something... but one never knows. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Carol. I appreciate your time and thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
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My pleasure!
Comment from Wendy G
Very dramatic. I hope Hilda will trust her gut. Those men will not let Patti die until she has given them the papers, but how good that Donatelli arrived just when he did. Those ghosts are doing a good job of helping! Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Very dramatic. I hope Hilda will trust her gut. Those men will not let Patti die until she has given them the papers, but how good that Donatelli arrived just when he did. Those ghosts are doing a good job of helping! Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Yes, I think Danni might get a harsh scolding from her bosses but she deserves a promotion. Donatelli would be sinking if it wasn't for her constant surveillance of others. Thanks so much for the review and your comments.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
I have to confess that what with Patty's snarky and insulting asides as she walked in, I'm not entirely convinced she doesn't deserve what almost happened to her. Donatelli and (thankfully) Danni arrived just in time...
A pity the ice princess Patty didn't have to sweat it out a little more--all that ice would have made a messy little puddle.
(smile)
Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I have to confess that what with Patty's snarky and insulting asides as she walked in, I'm not entirely convinced she doesn't deserve what almost happened to her. Donatelli and (thankfully) Danni arrived just in time...
A pity the ice princess Patty didn't have to sweat it out a little more--all that ice would have made a messy little puddle.
(smile)
Karenina
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Definitely! I almost thought about having them throw her in the car and a car chase be involved...but I think it's about time to wrap this baby up and car chases weren't in the budget. LOL
Smiles, Carol
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Oh, but it you could get his picked up and a movie made...(I happen to know you have a big "in" with a director---)
They'd definitely fit it in the budget!
Great job!
Karenina
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LOL
Comment from royowen
Patti appears to be as crass as they come, but she is scared, the powers that want the information that hilda possesses are cruel and will stop at nothing to get it, human life means nothing to them. But Donatelli has other ideas, Patti is a one, beautifully written Carol, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Patti appears to be as crass as they come, but she is scared, the powers that want the information that hilda possesses are cruel and will stop at nothing to get it, human life means nothing to them. But Donatelli has other ideas, Patti is a one, beautifully written Carol, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thanks, Roy....I think Patti should open up her eyes now and see that she almost got her life ended... hopefully she does. Thanks for reading another chapter and enjoying. Have a great day!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
This chapter is intense. Patti is in deep trouble thinking she can outsmart gangsters who will kill her. And Hilda is just gullible, believing Johan, and now Patti. I'm glad Danni is aware of everything and can advise Donatelli. We still have a way to go. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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This chapter is intense. Patti is in deep trouble thinking she can outsmart gangsters who will kill her. And Hilda is just gullible, believing Johan, and now Patti. I'm glad Danni is aware of everything and can advise Donatelli. We still have a way to go. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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It's getting a lot closer though...If Garth gets the papers from Angelo and connects them to the papers Donatelli has..they can start to understand how this comes together. Thanks as always, Lorraine.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm so glad it's Matthew she's run into, she can't get those papers and definitely can't give them to those men!! I'm hoping Danni and Matthew will be able to get them and even perhaps put Patti into protective custody. Things are coming to a head, Carol, and getting very exciting! I'll be watching for the next chapter. Love you lots, my friend. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I'm so glad it's Matthew she's run into, she can't get those papers and definitely can't give them to those men!! I'm hoping Danni and Matthew will be able to get them and even perhaps put Patti into protective custody. Things are coming to a head, Carol, and getting very exciting! I'll be watching for the next chapter. Love you lots, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I think you have ESP, my love. I was in need of a hug and a friendly face and who pops up on my computer screen... I just posted a short...but get your kleenex first.... at least I needed a lot of them.
Yes, things are stating to wrap up with this one. Garth needs to get the other papers from Angelo and then they will be able to see how the cases are locked together.
Thank you so much as always for the review and the lovely stars. You are so good to mee...and right this minute I needed it.
Lots of love, and hugs...Smiles will come later.
Carol