Comment from
zanya
Yes this is an entertaining write - amazing what can be said, so effectively and in so few words and by using verbs essentially and what a great pic to illustrate
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
Comment from
papa55mike
This great-grandpa makes all of those noises getting out of bed and worse during the day. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
So kind, Mike. God Bless you too.
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this made me smile as there are some creaking bones and squeaky creaking going on in this old gentleman, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024