Politician
Freedom lost13 total reviews
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
I love this. Very well written. Yes we must move on, I pray everyday. We are so much better than what happened to our country. We are United and not divided.
I pray the world will see we are Forever United, in spite of metastasis lies!
Write on. This took courage to share! Proud of you!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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I love this. Very well written. Yes we must move on, I pray everyday. We are so much better than what happened to our country. We are United and not divided.
I pray the world will see we are Forever United, in spite of metastasis lies!
Write on. This took courage to share! Proud of you!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you so very much much.
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes, there has been a lot of strife in the past several years. Ex president Donald Trump has caused a lot of it. He seems to not want it to end as the whole world does.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Yes, there has been a lot of strife in the past several years. Ex president Donald Trump has caused a lot of it. He seems to not want it to end as the whole world does.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Your words mean a great deal, thank you, and you stay healthy too.
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You're welcome and thank you.
Joan
Comment from Celyn
This fulfills the requirements of a rhyming acrostic poem and is well written. The rhyming is good but the rhythm is a bit off in places ie the lines are between 11 and 7 beats. I would have tried to make it a bit more consistent. Finally I would say 'instilled within' not 'instilled upon'.
Good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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This fulfills the requirements of a rhyming acrostic poem and is well written. The rhyming is good but the rhythm is a bit off in places ie the lines are between 11 and 7 beats. I would have tried to make it a bit more consistent. Finally I would say 'instilled within' not 'instilled upon'.
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This rhyming acrostic poem, POLITICIAN, follows the vertical first-letter word and suggests thatb the time for politicking is past and the time for action and results must finally arrive.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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This rhyming acrostic poem, POLITICIAN, follows the vertical first-letter word and suggests thatb the time for politicking is past and the time for action and results must finally arrive.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from JoannaN
This is a sad, but strong poem. The first line is a well-placed reference to the Bible. The content is good, the rhymes are good. The picture of Trump speaks more than thousand words. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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This is a sad, but strong poem. The first line is a well-placed reference to the Bible. The content is good, the rhymes are good. The picture of Trump speaks more than thousand words. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Well done! You must have had a lot of bad issues dealing with politicians in the past.
I have a few issues with them myself.
But you have a pretty negative view of them in general although in your picture you show Trump with dollars floating all around him.
Thank you for telling it like it is!
Jesse
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Well done! You must have had a lot of bad issues dealing with politicians in the past.
I have a few issues with them myself.
But you have a pretty negative view of them in general although in your picture you show Trump with dollars floating all around him.
Thank you for telling it like it is!
Jesse
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Most republicans are fine. Trump is in a whole other category. Thank you for your review.
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Yes. I agree!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a well-penned rhyming acrostic. The text is an okay size. It could be larger because there's a lot of space in your poem box. The message in each line is clearly stated and easily understood. It would present better if you dropped the first line down one or two spaces and made your vertical word stand-out from the rest of the text. Make it larger or a different color would help. That way each reader can readily see your acrostic term "politician". The visual fits well. I wish you luck in the contest. You have a good entry if you up your presentation for your poem.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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This is a well-penned rhyming acrostic. The text is an okay size. It could be larger because there's a lot of space in your poem box. The message in each line is clearly stated and easily understood. It would present better if you dropped the first line down one or two spaces and made your vertical word stand-out from the rest of the text. Make it larger or a different color would help. That way each reader can readily see your acrostic term "politician". The visual fits well. I wish you luck in the contest. You have a good entry if you up your presentation for your poem.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your great advice, I will try to improve my presentation, but I am not very good with that stuff. Also thank you for your review.
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You are welcome. After the contest is over contact me again and I will try to help you. I will send you some notes based on your questions. Good luck!
Comment from royowen
Moving on is easier said than done. As long as people have their own ambitions and agendas, it's unlikely that things will improve, it takes a concerted, mutual effort to achieve that. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Moving on is easier said than done. As long as people have their own ambitions and agendas, it's unlikely that things will improve, it takes a concerted, mutual effort to achieve that. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your review.
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A pleasure
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine acrostic and it sounds like the mid terms was a very close call and not the landslide everyone expected. You certainly have a divided country just now with both parties at opposite ends of opinions and no matter who gets in next time the people will not be happy. A poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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A fine acrostic and it sounds like the mid terms was a very close call and not the landslide everyone expected. You certainly have a divided country just now with both parties at opposite ends of opinions and no matter who gets in next time the people will not be happy. A poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Wendy G
A well-written and thoughtful acrostic with smooth rhymes and meaningful words. Best wishes for your entry.
Typo:" Insights" should be "incites", I believe, to fit your context.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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A well-written and thoughtful acrostic with smooth rhymes and meaningful words. Best wishes for your entry.
Typo:" Insights" should be "incites", I believe, to fit your context.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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I will change it. Thanks for the review and having my back.