Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Cindy Decker 2
JLR,
Nice chinquapin poem! I can feel the heat rising from roads and sidewalks; in PA a hot day like that would be accompanied by thick, stifling, humid air.
Very good chinquapin.
Good luck!
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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JLR,
Nice chinquapin poem! I can feel the heat rising from roads and sidewalks; in PA a hot day like that would be accompanied by thick, stifling, humid air.
Very good chinquapin.
Good luck!
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Cindy, thank you!
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You?re welcome 😊
Comment from karenina
Seriously!
A Cinquain that speaks to my own intolerance of extreme heat! Pass the lemonade, crank up the fan... A/C? Even better! Bacon should
"Sizzle"--- me? Not so much!
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Seriously!
A Cinquain that speaks to my own intolerance of extreme heat! Pass the lemonade, crank up the fan... A/C? Even better! Bacon should
"Sizzle"--- me? Not so much!
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Hahaha! I so fully agree, Ice Cold lemonde, please! 😊
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That would be perfect this 94-degree day!
Comment from Wendy G
Your poem is very well presented with the inclusion of that image! Yes, I understand that sort of heat, as we sometimes get it up to 115 or more here, and it's horrid if there is also high humidity. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Your poem is very well presented with the inclusion of that image! Yes, I understand that sort of heat, as we sometimes get it up to 115 or more here, and it's horrid if there is also high humidity. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Too hot, too humid, too little shade, UGH~ my sympathies to you, ❄️❄️❄️☃️☃️
Comment from Whitewave
JLR,
Wow! A hundred and four in the shade! Now that's getting hot! Makes me think of melting moments. What for? Not sure, but I think I would stay with the cool mountain air next time rather than swelter in the heat by the shore.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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JLR,
Wow! A hundred and four in the shade! Now that's getting hot! Makes me think of melting moments. What for? Not sure, but I think I would stay with the cool mountain air next time rather than swelter in the heat by the shore.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Man, what a dad will do for one of his adult daughters. I call this unconditional love in overdrive 🐻🐻🙏🙏
Comment from tfawcus
This is a common problem worldwide. The hot places are getting hotter still, the wet places, wetter still, and the windy places, windy still. There seems to be no escape from it!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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This is a common problem worldwide. The hot places are getting hotter still, the wet places, wetter still, and the windy places, windy still. There seems to be no escape from it!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Tony, things do seem discombobulated, doesn't it~
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Good job on your contest entry, JLR.
I like the way the road trip progressed.
Your syllable count is correct per line.
Summer is sizzling here at 107* the
last few days.
Bet wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Good job on your contest entry, JLR.
I like the way the road trip progressed.
Your syllable count is correct per line.
Summer is sizzling here at 107* the
last few days.
Bet wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Too hot, too humid, too little shade, UGH~ my sympathies to you, ❄️❄️❄️☃️☃️
Comment from jessizero
It is unbearably hot here, too. I like your poem. It starts out great with a road trip, then continues describing conditions. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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It is unbearably hot here, too. I like your poem. It starts out great with a road trip, then continues describing conditions. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Too hot, too humid, too little shade, UGH~ my sympathies to you, ❄️❄️❄️☃️☃️
Comment from Boogienights
Great poem and very timely. It seems like Temps are soaring everywhere and there's nothing we can do about it. I really like your contest entry, best of luck. :)
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Great poem and very timely. It seems like Temps are soaring everywhere and there's nothing we can do about it. I really like your contest entry, best of luck. :)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Too hot, too humid, too little shade, UGH~ my sympathies to you, ❄️❄️❄️☃️☃️
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Much too hot for me!! One hundred and four??? Crikey! That IS hot! We don't get temperatures like that here in the UK, thank goodness. Your cinquain poem is well written, and enjoyable to read. Well done and good luck. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Much too hot for me!! One hundred and four??? Crikey! That IS hot! We don't get temperatures like that here in the UK, thank goodness. Your cinquain poem is well written, and enjoyable to read. Well done and good luck. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you much Sandra!
Comment from dmt1967
This poem did make me chuckle as I wipe the sweat from my brow lol. I love the yellow in the picture as it adds to the topic. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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This poem did make me chuckle as I wipe the sweat from my brow lol. I love the yellow in the picture as it adds to the topic. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Smiling back! Thanks