Five O'clock Morning Sky
Love to watch the moon in the early morning..5 total reviews
Comment from Ramona Scarborough
This poem sets a mood with few words. Very well done. Getting up early was my nemesis when I was still working, especially in Winter. I wish you success in the contest.
Ramona
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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This poem sets a mood with few words. Very well done. Getting up early was my nemesis when I was still working, especially in Winter. I wish you success in the contest.
Ramona
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback. Hope you can now choose when you awaken.
Comment from Marienkiefer
Hello,
-I love the imagery in your poem of how nature takes its cue, on the ring of a bell, and unfolds into a new day.
-I love the way you have cast this poem, staged and scripted all the players.
-Short and sweet poem.
-Every last word in your poem seems to call on a prop or part of nature to play out a role in a production: blares (sound), shade (lighting); sky (performer); peeks (and camera, and, action), etc.
-This is fantastic.
-Have a nice evening.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Hello,
-I love the imagery in your poem of how nature takes its cue, on the ring of a bell, and unfolds into a new day.
-I love the way you have cast this poem, staged and scripted all the players.
-Short and sweet poem.
-Every last word in your poem seems to call on a prop or part of nature to play out a role in a production: blares (sound), shade (lighting); sky (performer); peeks (and camera, and, action), etc.
-This is fantastic.
-Have a nice evening.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and for the wonderful review. Very encouraging.
Comment from AbbyeK7
I love it. Descriptive, not ethereal. It's short, sweet, not wasting any words.
I enjoyed the reality of getting up early in the morning--most people do that. Reveling in the dawn, even for a short time is worth it.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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I love it. Descriptive, not ethereal. It's short, sweet, not wasting any words.
I enjoyed the reality of getting up early in the morning--most people do that. Reveling in the dawn, even for a short time is worth it.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read, review and comment.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well done on this short poem, nice picture you have chosen. Must be hard getting up this early, but I am glad you have found something to enjoy about it. This is the day that the Lord has made.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Well done on this short poem, nice picture you have chosen. Must be hard getting up this early, but I am glad you have found something to enjoy about it. This is the day that the Lord has made.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read, review and comment.
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You are welcome
Comment from jessizero
You painted a beautiful image with your 25 words. The picture that accompanies the piece is beautiful as well. Thank you for sharing this here. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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You painted a beautiful image with your 25 words. The picture that accompanies the piece is beautiful as well. Thank you for sharing this here. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read, review and comment.