Rising Star
You will be famous.3 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet, I liked your 5-7-5 poem, however I fear that it doesn't meet the requirements of the contest. Stacked 5-7-5 means you need more than one stanza:
Writing Prompt
Write a poem that has multiple stanzas. Each stanza is 5-7-5.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
Hello fellow poet, I liked your 5-7-5 poem, however I fear that it doesn't meet the requirements of the contest. Stacked 5-7-5 means you need more than one stanza:
Writing Prompt
Write a poem that has multiple stanzas. Each stanza is 5-7-5.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Okay, I have fixed the mistakes. Is it better now for a five stars rating? Please check. Thank you!
Comment from jessizero
This is encouraging and lovely. Thank you so much for sharing this message with the community. Keep writing and keep up the good work. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
This is encouraging and lovely. Thank you so much for sharing this message with the community. Keep writing and keep up the good work. Best wishes.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from in777wr#
The poem you wrote has a good message. The writing prompt calls for a poem that has multiple stanzas, each with the 5-7-5 syllable count. The picture you chose goes well with the poem. The lack of the multiple stanzas hurts this poem.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
The poem you wrote has a good message. The writing prompt calls for a poem that has multiple stanzas, each with the 5-7-5 syllable count. The picture you chose goes well with the poem. The lack of the multiple stanzas hurts this poem.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
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Okay, I fixed the mistakes is it better now for a five stars rating? Please check!