The right time
He waited for ...29 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a beautiful story with a great message. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with the rest of us. Keep up the good work! Best wishes.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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This was a beautiful story with a great message. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with the rest of us. Keep up the good work! Best wishes.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much. A super review!
Wendy
Comment from kahpot
God loves all and does not judge, Hello fellow Aussie, what a wonderful read and worthy winner, I really like your chose artwork for this story, as time is so important we need to believe that Bob's story will come to us all, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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God loves all and does not judge, Hello fellow Aussie, what a wonderful read and worthy winner, I really like your chose artwork for this story, as time is so important we need to believe that Bob's story will come to us all, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Another Aussie! Wonderful. Glad to meet you! Thank you very much! Such a lovely review, and I appreciate your encouragement a great deal.
Wendy
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Yes there are a few of us here
Comment from Thatguypk
I can understand why this won the Supernatural Fiction competition. It is beautifully written. I'm not at all religious, but there's no question at all that supernatural occurrences are a great source for interesting and engaging stories. You have created a perfect example of this. Thanks for sharing.
PK
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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I can understand why this won the Supernatural Fiction competition. It is beautifully written. I'm not at all religious, but there's no question at all that supernatural occurrences are a great source for interesting and engaging stories. You have created a perfect example of this. Thanks for sharing.
PK
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much! Such a lovely review, and I appreciate your encouragement a great deal.
Wendy
Comment from Shirley McLain
I loved your story all the way to the last word. You certainly held my attention. If I had a six, it would be yours. You did a great job, and I didn't find any errors. Shirley
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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I loved your story all the way to the last word. You certainly held my attention. If I had a six, it would be yours. You did a great job, and I didn't find any errors. Shirley
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for such a lovely and encouraging review. I am so glad you enjoyed it. (Even the thought of a six is wonderful!)
Wendy
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
I wish I could have seven stars to give this story. Jesus loves all, no matter who you are what you have done. This story goes straight to my heart because I survived because of Him only. Thanks for sharing and wish you the very best in the contest, Kit
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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I wish I could have seven stars to give this story. Jesus loves all, no matter who you are what you have done. This story goes straight to my heart because I survived because of Him only. Thanks for sharing and wish you the very best in the contest, Kit
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Thank you Kit! I am very encouraged by the honour of six stars and by your lovely words and good wishes. Greatly valued review. Wendy
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The pleasure is mine
Comment from DragonSkulls
Great write for the contest, Wendy. A friend of mine's father was on his death bed and said he saw the angel that was coming for him and he also knew her name. That plus a couple other things spiritual happened that were unexplained. Great piece. You got my vote.
Ron
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Great write for the contest, Wendy. A friend of mine's father was on his death bed and said he saw the angel that was coming for him and he also knew her name. That plus a couple other things spiritual happened that were unexplained. Great piece. You got my vote.
Ron
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Thank you Ron for a super review, and also for your vote. Both much appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Aussie
John 14:1-3 was my dad's favourite verse. He always made fun of the story of Jesus. I got mad at him (as children do) we had a slanging match. Finally he told me he talked to god in our garden. Whilst proclaiming always to be an atheist! Your story is a parallel of my real-life dad. He could quote the Bible and at his funeral I read his favourite verse about love 2 Corinthians 13 (I think) If we don't have love, we have nothing, and god is love. K xx
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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John 14:1-3 was my dad's favourite verse. He always made fun of the story of Jesus. I got mad at him (as children do) we had a slanging match. Finally he told me he talked to god in our garden. Whilst proclaiming always to be an atheist! Your story is a parallel of my real-life dad. He could quote the Bible and at his funeral I read his favourite verse about love 2 Corinthians 13 (I think) If we don't have love, we have nothing, and god is love. K xx
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much Kay. What a super review. Sounds like the fathers were alike! Many thanks too for the exceptional rating which I greatly appreciate! It's a great honour.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I guess the father was ready to go home this time. God was also ready to take him home. This story believes in going to church, but it does not have to be every Sunday.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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I guess the father was ready to go home this time. God was also ready to take him home. This story believes in going to church, but it does not have to be every Sunday.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for reviewing my story. I appreciate it. You are right, it's faith in Jesus which saves, ultimately, although church is helpful to grow as a Christian.
Comment from Frances Jean
A well written short story of absolute faith. I've heard stories from friends and family over the years of lights at the end of a tunnel and being sent back as it wasn't their time. Thanks for sharing Franky
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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A well written short story of absolute faith. I've heard stories from friends and family over the years of lights at the end of a tunnel and being sent back as it wasn't their time. Thanks for sharing Franky
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Hi Franky, I haven't seen you for a while. Hope all is well with you. Many thanks for reviewing my story - I appreciate it a lot.
Wendy
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Hi Wendy yes, I had a break from Fanstory whilst I concentrated on Christmas, scrolling, art and resin work. Now we're over in Canberra with our daughter for a couple of weeks. Hugs Franky
Comment from poetwatch
The Father is the temple, His Son is the way into the light, through Him we go see the Father, for God has a lot of room in His heart. Jesus is over us, the angels are his eyes. He gives His love to one and all, for we are all children of God. Thank you for sharing. This is a good entry for the Supernatural Fiction Contest.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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The Father is the temple, His Son is the way into the light, through Him we go see the Father, for God has a lot of room in His heart. Jesus is over us, the angels are his eyes. He gives His love to one and all, for we are all children of God. Thank you for sharing. This is a good entry for the Supernatural Fiction Contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review. Much appreciated.
Wendy