Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Trusting your Senses"Musings of an old man - 2022
32 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Though you talk from the POV of your 'sniffer' you also use other senses in your Octelle poem JLR with the
hearing that which smelled fishy.
Amusing cliche descriptions to go with your words. Well done,
cheers
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Though you talk from the POV of your 'sniffer' you also use other senses in your Octelle poem JLR with the
hearing that which smelled fishy.
Amusing cliche descriptions to go with your words. Well done,
cheers
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Hi Pearl, thank you - I trust you are well!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
As I just wrote my first ever Octelle, I am now going through reading the more skillful examples from this weeks club entry. This is a great one, written in a chatty fashion.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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As I just wrote my first ever Octelle, I am now going through reading the more skillful examples from this weeks club entry. This is a great one, written in a chatty fashion.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Congratulations! Aren't these prompts a wonderful opportunity to explore the world of words?
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your poem because of the imagery you created with your words. I found it a little humorous. I hope you keep writing and submitting.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem because of the imagery you created with your words. I found it a little humorous. I hope you keep writing and submitting.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Smiling back with gratitude
Comment from pookietoo
A very nice octelle poem. I wish you lots of luck in the poems you write about. Keep smiling and best wishes. Have a wonderful day. You are loved.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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A very nice octelle poem. I wish you lots of luck in the poems you write about. Keep smiling and best wishes. Have a wonderful day. You are loved.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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I thank you for your kind review.
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Welcome.
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Welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The jury's out on this Octelle form as I have seen it written in so many different ways with different metres and I couldn't detect any metre in your version, but I loved the sentiment here as we rely on our senses to smell a rat and emotional feelings give us a sense of reality and we rely on our gut instinct to make decisions, an unusual and quirky poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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The jury's out on this Octelle form as I have seen it written in so many different ways with different metres and I couldn't detect any metre in your version, but I loved the sentiment here as we rely on our senses to smell a rat and emotional feelings give us a sense of reality and we rely on our gut instinct to make decisions, an unusual and quirky poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is descriptive, clever, and entertaining. "Sniffer" is a good metaphor for the nose, possessor of that very important sense of smell.
Good rhyming
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Your poem is descriptive, clever, and entertaining. "Sniffer" is a good metaphor for the nose, possessor of that very important sense of smell.
Good rhyming
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Janice, thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your octelle for the club. I enjoyed reading your response. Your words are well thought out and create great imagery. You handled the style ell. Your repeated refrain fits in smoothly.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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You did a great job with your octelle for the club. I enjoyed reading your response. Your words are well thought out and create great imagery. You handled the style ell. Your repeated refrain fits in smoothly.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Jan, as always, I thank you for your comments.
Comment from Janet Foor
The Octella is a new poetic form to me. From your notes, I think you did a wonderful job with it.
A fun and informative read.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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The Octella is a new poetic form to me. From your notes, I think you did a wonderful job with it.
A fun and informative read.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Janet, thank you for your validation! Have a superior week!
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi these cliche have been here for donkey years and used too. They come handy all the time.
But still although I love the white, I cannot contain myself into the mould of this. I need freedom. Please forgive. I mean no hurt.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Hi these cliche have been here for donkey years and used too. They come handy all the time.
But still although I love the white, I cannot contain myself into the mould of this. I need freedom. Please forgive. I mean no hurt.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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No problem!
Comment from Bill Schott
This octelle, Trusting Your Senses, has the proper formatting and gives a bit of a send up for the senses and how they can keep us from erring. Neat.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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This octelle, Trusting Your Senses, has the proper formatting and gives a bit of a send up for the senses and how they can keep us from erring. Neat.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks I enjoy testing myself on new styles.