Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Hannah"Musings of an old man - 2022
14 total reviews
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi . JLR Congratulations a lovely Palindrome and a worthy winner too
Reads well both ways and one can see Hannah dancing in your words
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
Hi . JLR Congratulations a lovely Palindrome and a worthy winner too
Reads well both ways and one can see Hannah dancing in your words
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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I am very honored thank you those sixes are so appeciated~
Comment from karenina
How clever! Reads the same in entirety first line to last, then last line to first! A mirrored poem is supremely difficult to pull off! Hannah got the full boat treatment... And me with a six left to celebrate!
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
How clever! Reads the same in entirety first line to last, then last line to first! A mirrored poem is supremely difficult to pull off! Hannah got the full boat treatment... And me with a six left to celebrate!
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Wow! Thank you so very much, I am grateful.
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Wicked good. (As I used to say in my younger years!)
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Hannah ' , is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
' Hannah ' , is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Smiling back with appreciation, I trust you are doing great!
Comment from Louise Muller
This is such a gorgeous poem. We should all be so lucky to be as inspirational as Hannah. Good luck with the contest. I wish I could give you six stars, but sadly they are all gone.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
This is such a gorgeous poem. We should all be so lucky to be as inspirational as Hannah. Good luck with the contest. I wish I could give you six stars, but sadly they are all gone.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Louise, thank you I always will valuea virtual six. I apprecaite your validation.
Comment from Artasylum
Wow... I have never attempted a palindrome, they have scared me off. But, reading yours I got a sense of how to write this very fun form of poetry. Thanks for that. I loved this and the image is divine.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
Wow... I have never attempted a palindrome, they have scared me off. But, reading yours I got a sense of how to write this very fun form of poetry. Thanks for that. I loved this and the image is divine.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this great six star review, the artwork is awesome, I agree.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a very good job for a very difficult prompt. I've never tried one of these. I've got to believe that you will do very well in the contest. Does Hannah have a sister named Anna?
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
This is a very good job for a very difficult prompt. I've never tried one of these. I've got to believe that you will do very well in the contest. Does Hannah have a sister named Anna?
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Paul smiling back! Twin Palidromesnwords only.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You created the repetitive dancing here with the graceful sun rays and the laughter and frolicking, this girl has magic in her fingers and toes, a clever write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
You created the repetitive dancing here with the graceful sun rays and the laughter and frolicking, this girl has magic in her fingers and toes, a clever write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Thank you much!
Comment from mermaids
There is a light feel and flow to your words. The reader can feel and see the dancer dancing gracefully. Excellent use of words that creates a clear picture and evokes good feelings. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
There is a light feel and flow to your words. The reader can feel and see the dancer dancing gracefully. Excellent use of words that creates a clear picture and evokes good feelings. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Mermaids...I apprecaite your review and comments.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! I was amazed at reading it forward and backwards. Thank you for the definition. The author's words are clear, descriptive
and creative. The artwork is awesome and compliments both the theme
and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
Excellent Poem! I was amazed at reading it forward and backwards. Thank you for the definition. The author's words are clear, descriptive
and creative. The artwork is awesome and compliments both the theme
and words of this poem.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Sent back with a great big smile and thanks!
Comment from Sally Law
This is amazing! Thank you for introducing this form to me, mystery poet. How beautiful this is in both form and presentation. The art is stunning.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
This is amazing! Thank you for introducing this form to me, mystery poet. How beautiful this is in both form and presentation. The art is stunning.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Smiling back with apprecoation.