Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "At Transition"Musings of an old man - 2022
16 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
hi there,
word count is spot on so no worries there.
hard to write a story in 33 words and I feel there should be more to this! lol
Many would take issue with the assumption of five senses - There are 9 confirmed senses, 21 confirmed but less focused senses and 33 debatable human senses - shocker! lol
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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hi there,
word count is spot on so no worries there.
hard to write a story in 33 words and I feel there should be more to this! lol
Many would take issue with the assumption of five senses - There are 9 confirmed senses, 21 confirmed but less focused senses and 33 debatable human senses - shocker! lol
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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thanks
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful thoughts expressed here, and your short piece is accompanied by a stunning photo. I hope it will be something like that. best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Beautiful thoughts expressed here, and your short piece is accompanied by a stunning photo. I hope it will be something like that. best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Wendy, thank you very much.
Comment from Gee
Oh, very nicely done.
And I think this will be a good entry to your contest.
I can tell you that you are very close in your vision.
Thanks for sharing
Gee
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Oh, very nicely done.
And I think this will be a good entry to your contest.
I can tell you that you are very close in your vision.
Thanks for sharing
Gee
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Gee, thanks much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This thirty-three-word story, At Transition, seems to capture that fateful moment when the curtain is torn and the freedom from life is known. Nice.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This thirty-three-word story, At Transition, seems to capture that fateful moment when the curtain is torn and the freedom from life is known. Nice.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Bill, than you very much!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in great from, Mystery Author. The picture is perfect. Your few words, as required, describe the serene scene well. Even without a picture, I could have envisioned this from your well thought out words.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Your contest entry is in great from, Mystery Author. The picture is perfect. Your few words, as required, describe the serene scene well. Even without a picture, I could have envisioned this from your well thought out words.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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I thank you!
Comment from Terry Broxson
An excellent poem for this contest, good luck. The picture is perfect, or maybe the picture inspired the poem, either way, they go great together. Your imagery with only thirty-three words is well-done.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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An excellent poem for this contest, good luck. The picture is perfect, or maybe the picture inspired the poem, either way, they go great together. Your imagery with only thirty-three words is well-done.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Terry, thanks much!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. I enjoyed reading. The words you chose painted a beautiful picture as I read. That's talent. Again, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. I enjoyed reading. The words you chose painted a beautiful picture as I read. That's talent. Again, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Barbara, I value your enjoyment of this piece, thank you!
Comment from tfawcus
Sunlight seen through trees in this way is an awe-inspiring sight and your spiritual interpretation is understandable and believable. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Sunlight seen through trees in this way is an awe-inspiring sight and your spiritual interpretation is understandable and believable. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Thanks Tony.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Excellent writing. Well done.
I've read a few of the 27/33 word projects and had to just shake my head.
Best wishes and best of luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Excellent writing. Well done.
I've read a few of the 27/33 word projects and had to just shake my head.
Best wishes and best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Thank yo Wayne.
Comment from Ulla
Hi There, I liked this. It's one of the best entries I've seen so far. Although I'm not religious, this short piece does appeal to me. I can somehow identify with it. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Hi There, I liked this. It's one of the best entries I've seen so far. Although I'm not religious, this short piece does appeal to me. I can somehow identify with it. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Ulla, thank you very much.