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Dangerous battles on the front porch...
Hummer Hostility by Y. M. Roger
Rhyming Alliterisen writing prompt entry

Formidable and frenzied,
  they’re scouts with suicide speed –
 
Bombardiers that bump, bounce back…
  Tangling*. Tweedling*.  Thwack!
 
They are masters of melee
  at the cute candy café -
 
Tiny guards guided by greed.


Writing Prompt
Write a Rhyming Alliterisen - Poem consists of 7 lines with 7 syllables each and contains 1 alliteration in every line. Rhyme scheme is aabbcca.

Author Notes
Author note: Tangling is read with 3 syllables here. Tweedling has three syllable...just like when the hummingbirds make the sound! :) :)

     

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