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Love Is Oblivion
by michael cahill
oblivion
embraces love--
for desperation
remembering …
smiling faces
warming embraces
and
frozen moments
and dying embers
extinguishing
love
e t e r n a l
love
extinguishing embers
d y i n g
and
moments frozen
and embraces warming
faces smiling
remembering desperation
for love
embraces
oblivion
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Author Notes
free form-free verse
In free verse, the placement of the words is of the utmost importance. It is the poet attempting to guide the reader down the page from phrase to phrase and word to word. The best free verse when offered in free form has no or little punctuation or linear structure. The words are placed in such a way that if the reader follows them down the page, the meaning will be clear. The poet places the words so that the reader will stop and consider them and pause where the poet wishes.
This, of course, works when the poet has done a good job. That is for the reader to decide.
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