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Triolet poem contest entry
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: Lord my soul is thine alone by Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Triolet Poetry Contest contest entry

Lord my soul is thine alone
With obedient heart, I'll give it back
Not mine, just given for a loan
Lord my soul is thine alone
Be with us Lord, my soul and I
My soul will live, e'en though I die
Lord my soul is thine alone
With obedient heart, I'll give it back


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Author Notes
Thine is archaic, soft and spiritual, meaning yours... e'en means even.
This is my first Triolet ( if I remember correctly) it was, to say the least, an interesting project.

     

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