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: Dandelions smile (5-7-5) by Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
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Dandelions smile

Like daybreak brightness they bloom

A glorified tare

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Author Notes
The dandelion (a tare ie; weed ) holds many lessons for us. Although it is one of my favorite little flowers, I must admit, it can ruin a yard. In the same manner, sin can be sweet, pleasurable to look at, and can quite subtly steal your soul.

     

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