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34 syllables in 6 lines
Placid lake of blue by Jackarrie
34 syllables in 6 lines writing prompt entry



placid lake of blue
with the coolness of the breeze
solitude exudes

color changes hue
as the evening shadows fall
upon the dark shore



Writing Prompt
Please write six lines in a syllable format of 5-7-5-5-7-5. (SORT OF double-haiku style). May or may not be a space after third line.

First three lines must have the theme of a lake or pond, and what can be SEEN above surface at this moment in time.

Last three lines must have a theme of THAT lake/pond's surroundings (trees, animals etc.). NO WILLOW TREES ALLOWED.

Personification is fine.

No punctuation at all (hyphens are OK)
All written in lower case.

NO artwork.
NO author notes whatsoever.

Plain simple presentation in two colours only (one for background and one for text) with no highlighting of text

Must all be written in present tense.

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