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Words may hurt but sometimes there is an underlying truth.
Hurt feelings (a senryu) by persevere
Write A Senryu writing prompt entry

hurtful comment made
hours of rumination
discovered home truth


Writing Prompt
A senryu is a three line Japanese poem structurally similar to haiku. It is unrhymed and the subject is based human nature. Line 1 - 5 syllables - Line 2 - 7 syllables - Line 3 - 5 syllables. I

     

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