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A 5-7-5 on Melancholy
senryu (windows streaked deep blue) by vkmack
Senryu Poetry writing prompt entry
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windows streaked deep blue
unguarded tears of the soul
melancholy reigns


Writing Prompt
Write a senryu. Unrhymed Japanese verse of 5/7/5 syllables. Using human emotion.

Author Notes
I included a bit of word play in the last line.
Punctuation omitted.

     

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