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A Potlatch Club Entry - First and Last Poem
Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
: Snowstorm by JLR
Artwork by VMarguarite at FanArtReview.com

Sleeting icefall turned to snowflakes
before winter brings headaches.
The best drivers make bad mistakes
Cars upward, slide downward on hills
often is where one sees most spills.

But, boys and girls hop out of beds
and dash to the hills with their sleds
wrapped in warm clothes and caps on heads
sliding down all giggles and thrills
playing too hard to feel the chills.

A couple strolls around the park
on leash a dog with a deep bark.
The landscape turning white and stark
just barely seen were ducks and drakes.
Sleeting icefall turned to snowflakes.

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Author Notes
First and Last Poem
*15 lines; * 8 syllables per line

*Rhyme pattern for each stanza:
*Stanza 1:Aaabb
*Stanza 2:cccbb
*Stanza 3:dddaA

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