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Our bodies do all the heavy lifting, thanks friend Lloyd
Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
: My Body, My friend by JLR
Artwork by seshadri_sreenivasan at FanArtReview.com

Oh my most dependable abused friend
worn, torn, spent, bent.
At times when it mattered most, you did mend
your youth well-spent.
Nearly breaking you in the stunts employed
never once did you resist or avoid.
Chill, nap, rest, heal
I'll do cartwheels
with you on the other side, Lloyd.

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Author Notes
Potlatch Poetry Club entry

Ronsardian OdeL The Ronsardian ode (named after Pierre de Ronsard 1524-1585) is the only kind of ode that specifies a particular rhyming scheme.
RHYME SCHEME/SYLLABLE COUNT
ababccddc, with syllable counts of 10, 4, 10, 4, 10, 10, 4, 4, 8.

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