Mystery and Crime Fiction posted June 17, 2020 | Chapters: | ...10 11 -12- 13... |
With Cody injured, Jack must find a way to get him out of th
A chapter in the book Looking for Orion - 2
The Hit -- part 3
by DeboraDyess
Background When Jack talks his brother into a weekend camping trip, neither have a clue what's in store for them. |
Jack glanced up at the blue sky, clouds dancing unconcerned just above the treetops. They looked almost close enough to touch. Suddenly he thought of the bulky toy circular he'd stuck in his jean pocket. That, coupled with the gauze strips in the little kit, could serve as a splint for the arm. If he could deal with the injury to the arm and control the bleeding from the wound in Cody's back, the rest seemed minor. "Cody," Jack said softly, "look at me." He took Cody's face in his hand, but Cody whined and pulled away and he let go. "Cody," he repeated, "look at me." Cody turned his head slightly, tried to focus on his brother, closed his eyes and opened them again. A deep cut ran from beside his left eye to the middle of his ashen cheek. His lips, the color of milk, were split and seeping bright red. Jack looked into his eyes. The pupils were even, but when Jack blocked the sun with his body and then moved away, they were slow to react to the changing light. Cody couldn't seem to focus. Jack wondered how serious the concussion was. "It must ... be really bad." Cody interrupted his thoughts. Jack didn't answer. "I've never seen you... look so scared." Jack looked away for a minute, wishing he could hide his feelings better from his brother. "It's okay," he assured Cody. He chewed on his bottom lip for a minute, thinking. The damage to the wrist was worse than any break Jack had ever seen. They wouldn't get anywhere with a displaced fracture slowing them down. With the angle Cody's hand had ended up, Jack wasn't even sure it was getting an adequate blood supply. To get Cody away from here he had to immobilize the arm. He would have to set it, he decided, even if the blood flow hadn't been interrupted. "Here's the plan. I'm going to splint your arm, and then we're going to get the heck out of Dodge." Cody frowned at him. "Splint ..." he took a shallow breath, "my arm?" Jack nodded toward the mangled wrist. "Cody, doesn't that hurt?" Cody turned his head, looked, then turned back to Jack, panic in his pale eyes. "Oh, God, Jack ..." "Easy. It's okay." The level of calm in his voice surprised him. Not a trace of his own fear showed as he spoke. "Calm down, now. I'm getting you out of here. You don't need to worry, okay? Just rest for a minute, and let me do this. We're going to have to keep our heads if we're going to get ourselves out of this." Cody nodded and seemed to quiet some, but still writhed in pain. Jack pulled the gauze out of the first aid kit. The thought of setting the badly broken bones scared him, but with the material he had on hand he didn't know what else to do. Right now, he decided, the only thing he could concentrate on was getting Cody to help. Any damage he did could be fixed when they got to a hospital. He glanced around the hill again. If he and Cody were caught here, with the gunmen firing down on them they wouldn't stand a chance. That made the decision easy. Rising and stepping over Cody, Jack sat on his brother's right side. Without moving the injured arm he slipped Cody's gold wedding band off the ring finger of his right hand and felt for a pulse in the wrist. He frowned, repositioned his finger and concentrated. He found a pulse, weak, but there. The blood flow to Cody's hand hadn't been completely blocked, but Jack worried that there wasn't enough getting through to make much difference. Hopefully, setting the arm would help that, too. He pocketed the wedding band and put his foot against Cody's underarm. "I'll pull on three," he warned. Cody licked his torn lips and nodded. "It hurts now," he said, sounding like a little boy. It's going to hurt worse, Jack thought. "Grit your teeth," he suggested. He took Cody's right hand. Cody reached for Jack. "Oh, God! Jack!" he cried franticly, "wait! Jack, wait! I think ... my hand—" Jack realized as Cody began to speak that the hand was swollen, too. He hesitated only a second, then closed his eyes and pulled hard. He felt the bones in the arm slide into place, but the hand shifted, too, and Jack knew he'd made that injury worse. Cody stopped midsentence, the words strangled in his throat. For a second, his eyes widened in shock and pain. He stiffened briefly, his eyes lost focus and rolled back and he exhaled, slipping into unconsciousness. Jack sat still, fighting nausea and dizziness. He blew air slowly from puffed cheeks and frowned, swallowing and saying aloud, "Well, that was really, really bad." He splinted the arm, using the circular for support and wrapping the long gauze strips around it. After he finished, he examined the other injuries Cody had complained about. The cut on his lip was minor, but the one on his face was deep, and still bleeding. "Well, Code," Jack said as he gently placed butterfly stitches across the torn skin, "so much for the perfect face. Mom always said you were too handsome for your own good, anyway." He was less worried about the loss of the perfect face than with the loss of any more blood. He ripped open the front of his brother's ruined shirt. The ribs on his left side were already bruising and swollen. In a normal situation, Jack knew, they wouldn't even wrap them, but this was anything but a normal situation. If he couldn't reach help on the cell phone he wanted some kind of support around them before they started their journey out of the park. He decided to tend them when they got back to camp. The longer they stayed here the more nervous Jack grew. The sound of small animals and wind made him increasingly jumpy. The gun on the ground beside him seemed too far away. He sighed. Everything seemed too far away. He'd moved down to check the injured knee when Cody started to stir. As Jack ripped the knee out of the bloody, torn jeans Cody whispered, "Jack?" "Right here, buddy." "Those are... seventy dollar jeans … you just tore." "That's what you get for wearing seventy dollar jeans camping, you nitwit. You and your expensive clothes. Anyway, you tore them first." He examined Cody's knee. Nothing broken, he decided with relief, but the injury would make their escape just that much more difficult. "Knee's not too bad," he told his brother. "I've seen Travis get worse than this wrestling with his mamma." Cody didn't answer. Jack glanced up at his brother's pale face. Cody was staring just above his head, frowning slightly. Jack grabbed the Glock and spun, all in one motion. There was nothing behind him. No bad guys. No birds. Nothing. He turned back to Cody. "What?" "I remember … some, anyway. There were five guys. Four ... big, blond. Armed to the teeth. But the other one … old. Hispanic, I think. Dressed all wrong. And scared." He paused. "It was a hit, wasn't it? They shot the old guy." "Maybe." Jack looked around again. Now he knew they'd be coming back. "He ran," Cody said, suddenly. "Who?" "The old guy." "Well, let's hope he's fast. Maybe they won't be looking for you while they're looking for him. He might buy us a little time, at least." Jack's eyebrows drew together as he spoke. He didn't like the idea of the old man, scared and running for his life, but he couldn't help him. He had his hands full taking care of Cody, and he had no idea where the old man had gone. He checked the ridge again. "Where's that cell phone of yours? Maybe we can call for the Calvary." "Left it in camp." Jack looked away, hiding his disappointment. If he hadn't teased Cody about it they may have the phone here now. They could call for police and a helicopter to lift him out. He looked at his brother. Cody lay with his eyes squeezed shut, chewing his lower lip. HIs body still convulsed as waves of pain stabbed through him, but for the most part, he seemed more in control. He opened his eyes when Jack touched his hand. "I'm really scared, Jack," he whispered. Jack cleared his throat, raising his eyebrows. "I know. It'll be okay." He looked skyward again to relieve the tension in his neck. "You feel like sitting up?" he asked. It didn't matter if Cody felt like it or not, and both of them knew that. "No," Cody answered. He lifted his left hand as Jack moved to kneel beside him. "Help me anyway." Jack lifted him to a sitting position as carefully as possible, aware that he hurt Cody with every movement. "I'm sorry, kid," Cody nodded, tight-lipped. Jack pulled his tee shirt over his head. Using his pocketknife he cut the shirt in half then along the side seam, making two long strips. With one he made a sling, tying it behind his brother's neck to support the weight of the injured arm. The other he tied around Cody's middle, securing his arm to his chest to prevent as much movement as possible in the trip down the hill. "You ready for this?" "Like a root canal," Cody breathed, trying to grin reassurance to his brother. It turned into a grimace, and Cody swallowed hard to stifle a moan. Jack put his arm around his brother's back, catching hold of a belt loop on his jeans, and let Cody slide his left arm around his shoulders. "Slow and easy," he instructed, and he lifted. Jack watched his brother for a minute, thinking of the supplies in the sorely inadequate first aid kit. He'd put the kit together for fishing trips with Travis, planning for skinned knees, hooks in fingers, poison ivy and the like. Never had he anticipated anything serious. He cursed himself for his shortsightedness. |
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