Satire Poetry posted August 29, 2017


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Is there such a thing?

The perfect man, The perfect dream

by DR DIP

THE PERFECT MAN, THE PERFECT DREAM



I dream and see the perfect man

The perfect shadow in my perfect plan

I dream of how he'd serenade 

I dream of a life together played



To be the woman I want to be

The perfect shadow of a man I see

The perfect kiss, the perfect rose

The perfect wish in perfect prose



I see the man in shadow dreams

Why can't he be just like he seems

When I grow old he'll be always there

Offering a rose, to show his care



The rose will be, our love, our dream

The perfect man, the perfect team



dip.

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Is there such a thing as the perfect man?I have written this in the eyes of a woman obviously.
I thought we were all just arseholes lol
I am putting this under the category of satire more than romance. lol
dip
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