| Commentary and Philosophy Fiction posted June 8, 2014 |
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Short Story-100 Word Dash-Contest Entry
Political Correctness?
by michaelcahill
100 Word Dash Contest Winner
Oh my! The way she walks. Is there even a chance? I put on my best swaggy walk and saunter over. I'd considered ambling, but she's too, yyeeeeooowwwww, hottttt!
"What's up?" I smoothly sez.
"Oh, nuthin' but the breeze in the trees." Her alliterated smooth retort.
"Is there a chance you'd care to dance, while they look askance, as they covet our romance?"
She leans forward and kisses me. I can't believe the softness of her lips. I can't believe my luck.
Something's up...
I can't believe my confusion.
She's a he. What to do! I'm a bleeding heart liberal!
Oh my! The way she walks. Is there even a chance? I put on my best swaggy walk and saunter over. I'd considered ambling, but she's too, yyeeeeooowwwww, hottttt!
"What's up?" I smoothly sez.
"Oh, nuthin' but the breeze in the trees." Her alliterated smooth retort.
"Is there a chance you'd care to dance, while they look askance, as they covet our romance?"
She leans forward and kisses me. I can't believe the softness of her lips. I can't believe my luck.
Something's up...
I can't believe my confusion.
She's a he. What to do! I'm a bleeding heart liberal!
"What's up?" I smoothly sez.
"Oh, nuthin' but the breeze in the trees." Her alliterated smooth retort.
"Is there a chance you'd care to dance, while they look askance, as they covet our romance?"
She leans forward and kisses me. I can't believe the softness of her lips. I can't believe my luck.
Something's up...
I can't believe my confusion.
She's a he. What to do! I'm a bleeding heart liberal!
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Writing Prompt Topic: A first kiss between strangers. Let's take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story with just 100 words. If so this is your opportunity to shine. |
100 Word Dash Contest Winner |
 Recognized |
How far does one take one's intellectual beliefs. Hahaha. I recall being in jail one time when this gorgeous woman was brought through. The inmates started howling like a pack of men seem to do in that situation. (very classy). I mentioned to one of the other inmates, "They do realize that this is a men's facility, right?" So, this occurred to me as something to think about!! I say, it takes all kinds to make for a beautiful world. Not telling anyone how they should believe at all.
Thanks to Google images. Yep, he's a guy.
Word said 100 words. When I put it here, it said 102. So, now it says 100 according to Fanstory-advanced-editor, The Worlds Authority!!! Now it says 102. I counted on my fingers, 100. That is the count I am going with. I don't know what advanced editor is counting.
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and 2 member cents. Thanks to Google images. Yep, he's a guy.
Word said 100 words. When I put it here, it said 102. So, now it says 100 according to Fanstory-advanced-editor, The Worlds Authority!!! Now it says 102. I counted on my fingers, 100. That is the count I am going with. I don't know what advanced editor is counting.
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