General Fiction posted June 7, 2014


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Karma

by Spiritual Echo

Some say it was a power outage. I say it was karma.

Grady was ragging on me; my dress was too short, too much cleavage--he said I looked like a whore. He took me to the club anyway, but spent all night flirting with other women.

The music stopped, it was pitch black. I felt gentle lips on mine and a soft voice whispered, 'You can do better, Girl.'

When the lights flashed on, I saw Grady pawing a woman in the corner.

Six men were leaning against the bar, smiling--at me!

Yup--karma. I surveyed my options.



100 Word Dash writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Topic: A first kiss between strangers.

Let's take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story with just 100 words. If so this is your opportunity to shine.

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