General Fiction posted January 3, 2014


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60 word story

Eight going On Eighty

by Spiritual Echo

Head buried in her hands, anguished, she looked up. At the sight of his back as he walked away, she burst into tears again. "You don't need me anymore," she wailed.

"Sure I do," he yelled back over his shoulder. "But, geeez, Grandma, I'm eight years old. I can cross the street by myself."



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