General Poetry posted April 29, 2010 |
something I know a little about, unfortunately...
Doom and Gloom
by Realist101
Numb, cloying, clinging pain,
Cannot begin to hide the shame Of never knowing what to do, Or where to turn in staying sane There hiding in a darkened room, A soul is dying in the gloom As sadness steals the very heart, Of those who cry and cannot part With empty and impending doom, Live and die on shredded moon The sun a faded, dying bloom, And praying now, the end is soon ... |
Sad Poems writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt Sadness has overcome us all at one time or another. Either caused by a relative or close friend's death or from the girl or guy that broke our heart or just life in general. We all handle situations differently, some good, some bad. This contest gives us the ability to explore this. Your poem can also play into other emotions that are common to writing like this such as anger or depression. |
I am not sure about this punctuation, ? Any comments welcome, and thank you for reading!! Trying to cheer up, thanks to all the good FS friends I have found! Also thank you to MinoYasu for the astounding art, "tears of a clown" theme?
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