General Poetry posted November 16, 2024


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Death by broken heart.

Oh...Ophelia

by DonandVicki

As you drifted slowly downstream
the heart-broken willow brushed
your dark auburn hair as it wept.

They found you caught,
held tight in the bullrushes
petal-less posies floated by.

The moon bequeaths
its pallid reflection
in my love's drown-dead eyes.




Free Form Poetry Contest contest entry

Recognized

#29
November
2024


Shakespear's Ophelia, she appears in Shakespear's play "Hamlet".
She is Hamlet's girlfriend. Ophelia is driven crazy by her
boyfriend and kills herself.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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