Self Improvement Poetry posted June 14, 2021


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A Choka Poem-for the club challenge

Love's Light

by kahpot

beneath lotus wings

hiding beyond moonlight's gaze

innocence ascends

balmy waters undisturbed

as rising beauty

illuminates freedom's bliss

scarlet ibis nests


upon mirrored companion

content to adorn love's light



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This weeks event is to write a CHOKA. It's a form of Japanese court poetry of the 6th to 14th century consisting of (5-7 5-7 5-7- 5-7-7) syllables pattern.
Thank you Gypsy Blue Rose for leading this club
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Club entry for the "CHOKA POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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