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The Squall

Tarpon fishing with Captain Jeb

33 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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ALWAYS listen to that voice even when folks laugh and mock you.... even when it turns out to be 'nothing', hold your head high! ;) It was always louder when I was a mom... but it's still there! ;) A wonderful offering for the contest, my lady -- well done! ;) Yvette
P.S. Only about 5 days behind now.... Lol! I'll get caught up soon, though, and star there.. ï?? ;) Until, of course, something unexpected happens (that could never happen, yeah? Ugh!) ;) ;) ;)

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
    Thank you for the wonderful review and fellowship of motherhood. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs.....
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I know that voice and have learned to listen to it. When I haven't, it's not good. LOL Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you the very best luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
    Thank you, dear Barbara. I appreciate the excellent review and kind compliments. The voice leads on....
    Sending you my best today as always
    Sal XOs.....
Comment from Debbie Pope
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Glad you lived to tell this tale, Sally. You tell it so well. My husband has capsized a catamaran, and once, on a company trip, a rescue boat had to take on about thirty passengers when the boat we were on began to take on water. I could really feel your fright with this one.
The little voice inside me said Sally deserves a six for this one. Good job.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
    Dear Debbie, how kind and generous you are! Six shiny stars, too!! I am honored. Thank you for the lovely review and fellowship of fright.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs......
Comment from poetwatch
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Do you go to Florida for a vacation on a boat, Sally? I love the ocean, used to go to Boca Chica beach every chance I got, never on a boat. I don't know how it feels like, but after reading your adventure I think I'll stick to the sand on the beach. :) Thank you, Sally, for sharing life's great thrill. :) This is a good offering for the True Story Contest.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    I love and vacation in Florida, dear poet. Occasionally, we go to the mountains of North Georgia where I am from. Our boys and grandchildren prefer the beach so we pretty much keep it at that. With my blindness, it is easier to stay closer to home. Thanks so much for the kind review and well-wishes, dear poet.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xo
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Exceptional
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Oh my! I would have been totally freaked out. I can't swim! That is the way in FL. Terrible storm one minute, and calm the next. We have had a bad storm every night, I don't remember having so many later, they always came in the afternoon, I thought. Weather is changing and weird just like everything else that is going on right now. I'm so glad you got back safely and no need to tread water. Well done as always.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    Yes we do have terrible storms in Florida. My husband bought me a high powered telescope for night star and moon gazing for my birthday. We've had evening storms every night.

    I'm deeply honored by your sweet review and generous stars. More than anything, I am delighted to see you again and have you back! Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs......
Comment from Sumpta
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Thank God you were saved after everything. Most times our inner voices speak reality but we don't always listen. I learnt it the hard way too.
Nice one Sal.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind compliments. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally XOs......
Comment from Mary Furlong
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Great story. A terrific entry for the contest. I almost hate to offer ideas, for the story is excellent as is, but here goes anyway: First, I think it would be even more exciting if you started with your anxiety and then filled in just what background info was needed. Next, it might be a good idea to tell the boys' ages right away. Just some thoughts for future reference. I think you have a great chance in the contest.


 Comment Written 14-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    Thank you for the excellent review and kind comments. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs.....
reply by Mary Furlong on 14-Aug-2020
Comment from Janetsue
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This is an amazing true story entry, Sally. It reveals a live example of the power of prayer. You make readers feel a part of the situation as the lines are read rapidly, keeping in step with the sudden action. I think you're going to do very well in the contest! Smiles, Janet

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    Thank you, dear Janet. I really appreciate the excellent review and kind compliments.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs......
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
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What a edge of the seat captivating read that you penned here. The picture is beautiful, but the most beautifully profound thing is that God answers prayers. Thank you for sharing a memorable part of your life with us. Have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    Thanks so much for the excellent review of my contest entry, Bobby. It is so appreciated.
    Sending my best to you and Millie,
    Sal XOs.....
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Exceptional
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Hello Sally, you tell your story very well with a confident knowledge of nautical terms and a talent for story telling. A terrifying experience at the mercy of the sea. Not like stopping the bus and getting off when the inner voice speaks! Nice ending with the bible reference. A good, well written, true experience with a happy ending. Love Dorothy xxx

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    Dear Dorothy, what a lovely review. Thank you so much. It is so good to see you and now you come bearing stars! I am honored. I miss you and so many others that have been absent lately. This cheered me!!!
    Sending you my best today,
    Sal XOs......
reply by Dorothy Farrell on 14-Aug-2020
    Hi Sally, taking a break for a while - busy painting for commissions. Keeps my busy, but I like to pop in now and again to see some of those I follow. Keep up the good work - love Dorothy xxx