Capture The Moment
A Mental Health contest poem12 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I think the key to good mental health is letting it go. Jesus said take one day at a time, why borrow tommorow's troubles? Sending you my best today as always, dear mystery poet, and my very best for the contest,
Sally Law xo
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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I think the key to good mental health is letting it go. Jesus said take one day at a time, why borrow tommorow's troubles? Sending you my best today as always, dear mystery poet, and my very best for the contest,
Sally Law xo
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Absolutely! I know its hard, but definitely got to "let it go"! Mwah! :)
Comment from June Sargent
This is such an uplifting piece, like the music you chose to accompany the poem. Life needs to be embraced in such a way that it squeezes out the negative and keeps the positive. Find your passion and hold on to it. Well said.
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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This is such an uplifting piece, like the music you chose to accompany the poem. Life needs to be embraced in such a way that it squeezes out the negative and keeps the positive. Find your passion and hold on to it. Well said.
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thank you, June! Appreciate you enjoyed!! :)
Comment from Enzo Lance
I love the strict meter you put in every line until the last stanza of your poem. Your rhyming sound natural when I read it loud. Usually you can sense it's awkward when you read it aloud. This is very uplifting , a fit for an Mental Health contest prompt. Well Done.
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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I love the strict meter you put in every line until the last stanza of your poem. Your rhyming sound natural when I read it loud. Usually you can sense it's awkward when you read it aloud. This is very uplifting , a fit for an Mental Health contest prompt. Well Done.
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you! Appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about keeping the mind busy with positivity is better than to give in to negativity that will not help anyone to have a good sane mind.
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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A very well-written poem about keeping the mind busy with positivity is better than to give in to negativity that will not help anyone to have a good sane mind.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you very much! We need a little positive these days!! :)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I really enjoyed this inspirational piece. I like the joyful way it dances along
with words of encouragement. Of course, simply letting go of sadness isn't always so easy. Ir depends . . . .
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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I really enjoyed this inspirational piece. I like the joyful way it dances along
with words of encouragement. Of course, simply letting go of sadness isn't always so easy. Ir depends . . . .
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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So true! But for a moment, maybe this poem would allow one to feel happier even if just for a moment! Appreciate you enjoyed! :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and
presentation.
-A well written poem
with good meter, imagery,
and rhyme.
-It flows well with very
good, positive suggestions:
"sing loud and be glad."
-A good concluding verse, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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-Good image and
presentation.
-A well written poem
with good meter, imagery,
and rhyme.
-It flows well with very
good, positive suggestions:
"sing loud and be glad."
-A good concluding verse, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you very much! Trying to keep a positive vibe going at this difficult time for us all. :)
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You are very welcome. The more positive vibes, the better!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are uplifting words and your message comes across loud of clear and we only get one life and we should live it to the full, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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These are uplifting words and your message comes across loud of clear and we only get one life and we should live it to the full, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you so much! Trying to keep a positive message going through this difficult time! :).
Comment from Vanna1
Your poem flows nicely. It is witty and true. I like the picture. Good rhyming. The words and message are good and uplifting. An important positive word of advice.
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Your poem flows nicely. It is witty and true. I like the picture. Good rhyming. The words and message are good and uplifting. An important positive word of advice.
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you! Easy to focus on depressing things at this time, so thought I?d bring some uplifting message for us all! :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is great advice, Mystery Author. Your poem reads well--the lines are smooth, the rhymes are great, the image is fitting, and your message is clear. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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This is great advice, Mystery Author. Your poem reads well--the lines are smooth, the rhymes are great, the image is fitting, and your message is clear. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you so much! So gkad you enjoyed!! :)
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This is a really great poem. It's postive and has a great feeling to it. I will enjoy reading more of your work. I'm going to look out for more of these from you.
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reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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This is a really great poem. It's postive and has a great feeling to it. I will enjoy reading more of your work. I'm going to look out for more of these from you.
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Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you for your awesome feedback! Trying to keep a positive message going during these difficult times! :)