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ABC Super Hero

superhero fun

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Comment from lakeport
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ABC super hero, indeed they are great in movies and cartoons. that's a great story poem,nice in form and rhyme.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
    Thank you for the kind comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a great day.
reply by lakeport on 02-Sep-2013
    your welcome.Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by lakeport on 02-Sep-2013
    your welcome,Hugs!Lakeport,
Comment from mountainwriter49
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Good Evening, Poet

What a fun poem to read this evening. It is well scribed
for a child to enjoy, as well as adults! The end rhyming
makes the poem flow and adds to the quality of the read.

Well done and good luck in the prompt.

Ray

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
    Thank you, Ray. I appreciate the encouraging review and your kind remarks. I'm happy you enjoyed reading it.
Comment from Louise Michelle
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Well, you certainly pulled this off nicely. I don't know what child wouldn't enjoy hearing this read to them, as they charged around the room in their imagination. When I was little I jumped off the couch, pretending to be superman, and sprained my arm, lol. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
    Thank you, Lou. I appreciate the kind comments and the generous review. I think I got a few bumps and bruises playing a superhero as well. Love watching my nieces and nephews play them now.
Comment from Matthew M.
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I have really enjoyed the latest round of super hero movies. They have been very entertaining. I like in your poem you highlight the exploits of superheroes and how they win and save the day.
I thought it was very creative to use all the letters of the alphabet for your acrostic.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Thank you. I appreciate the kind comments and the generous stars. I wrote this for my nephew, but I have to admit that I love the superhero movies too. Can't wait for the next one.
Comment from pbroussard209
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This is awesome, my five year old would love it. He goes back and forth between super hero's and Sonic the hedgehog. lol. The Rhyme was spot on and it was fun for even a grown up to read.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the very encouraging remarks and the generous stars. I hope your five year old does like it and I'm so glad you did.
Comment from Parissa
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I really enjoyed reading this poem it put a smile on my face. Reminded me of how much I enjoyed reading about superheros when I was a kid. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the kind comments. I enjoyed superheroes as a kid too. They are different heroes than my nephew enjoys now, but I'm glad they still swoop in to save the day.
Comment from donaldww
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This is an excellent poem for kids. I think the ABC acrostic is a good choice for kids. It's an organizational feature that is easily understood.

Good luck with the contest.

Cheers,
DW

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Thank you for you kind comments and best wishes. i appreciate the generous review.
Comment from Irish Rain
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what a wonderful poem for a child! sure to be a winner...what child..doesn't love superheros? best of luck to you in this contest...thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the gracious comments, well wishes and the generous review. I appreciate the generous rating.
Comment from Selina Stambi
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You have really got into a little boy's head with this one!

I could feel the excitement and action drama in the lines...

Of course the good guys win ... and then, little Tom, Dick and Harry get to go to bed!

Well done. All the best in the contest.

I haven't bumped into your writing before, wjd. Nice to meet you! :)

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the gracious remarks and well wishes. I appreciate the generous review. Nice to meet you. By the way, great name, Reachingforthestars.
Comment from Gungalo
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Ultimately, good guys are first.
Villans, you can do your worst.
When famous heroes say, "You go!"--
X-men, Avengers, G.I. Joe--
You'll disappear without a trace
Zapped to dust in outer space.

This is a great write for the youngsters Debi. Superheroes are still in and very much in control. Awesome following of the alphabet with this one.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Thank you, Gungalo. I wrote it for my nephew since he is way into the X-men, especially Wolverine, all the Avengers and G.I. Joe. Children's poetry is not normally what I write, but I thought, why not? I appreciate the generous review and gracious remarks.
reply by Gungalo on 29-Aug-2013
    Smile.