Comment from Elias Noor

Excellent

This is a heartfelt and evocative piece that thoughtfully explores mortality, grief, and existential doubt. Slight adjustments in rhythm and structure could deepen its emotional resonance even further.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025

Thank you Elias for the positive review and 5 star rating. I only dabble in poetry and certainly do not consider it a strength in my writing. This is very encouraging.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I really felt the emotion in your poem. The way you share the heaviness of losing loved ones and facing the inevitable is something I think we can all relate to. The lines about "fading, crumbling" and "trying to find meaning" really hit me. Your words give a raw look at grief and the uncertainty that comes with it. . Your poem touches on a deep part of life and does it with such genuine feeling. Keep writing from the heart!

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025

Thank you Michael, I'm pleased that my poem resonated with you. Thanks as well for the positive review and a 5 star rating. I don't consider poetry to be strength in my writing at all, so it's great to get positive reinforcement