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A Vision in the Night

A nocturnal animal

6 total reviews 
Comment from ESOSTINE
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I love the smooth flow of your beautiful poem with very creative imagery. The words are unforced and could go for a music. Welcome to Fanstory family as we look forward to reading more of your work. Well done, Kahlani.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    Thank you. I'm very excited to be a part of this family.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Hi, Kahlani!

First and foremost, welcome to FS, and congratulations on your first milestone post!! That's no small accomplishment in and of itself, but you've ramped up that achievement by making that post QUITE delightful land beautiful, serene and artistic. Your chosen words flow together beautifully and create a vibe and a mental picture that I enjoyed very much. I'll look forward to reading you again and again! xoxo

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much, Rachelle. I wrote that poem in 2005 but have never dared to publish it. Your words mean a lot.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 03-Oct-2024
    I'm so glad you decided to be brave. You SHOULD post your work; it's wonderful!!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you for your encouraging words.
Comment from DonandVicki
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For a first post this is quite astounding. I enjoyed the visuals that I got from reading your poem. A very well crafted free verse poem. Are you new to writing poetry. Well done.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    No, I've been writing poetry for years but have only published a couple. I wrote A Vision in the Night in 2005 and finally decided to publish it. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Wendy G
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Welcome to FanStory and I hope you enjoy sharing your work here. Congratulations on your first post - a succinct and lovely one, with definite atmosphere about a wild animal furtively moving along in moonlight. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you for your lovely thoughts, Wendy.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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The night is full of creatures lurking in the dark and we glimpse the reflection of the moon in there eyes on occasions as it remind us that the earth never really sleeps. I enjoyed your fine words for the contest and welcome you to Fanstory, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Dolly. Your words are beautiful.
Comment from NanaGaye
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Congratulations on your first post. Your poem certainly shows a scene even without the picture you chose. A big welcome to Fanstory and keep writing. All the best NanaGaye

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you for your encouragement, NanaGaye.