Swinging couple
This touched my heart9 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Love goes round and round or in this case back and forth! Your picture and the words give a happy feeling to the reader and it's a joy to imagine being there on that swing... once more. Great job!
Smiles, Carol
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Love goes round and round or in this case back and forth! Your picture and the words give a happy feeling to the reader and it's a joy to imagine being there on that swing... once more. Great job!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. You very accurately described the artwork and I know this couple is enjoying the romantic time together. Good luck with the contest.
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. You very accurately described the artwork and I know this couple is enjoying the romantic time together. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
Comment from jim vecchio
How I wish I could be on that swing with my love. I questioned whether this could be considered a photo but I looked sat the rules which said "Share a picture of something or someone that you love". This certainly qualifies as a picture.
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How I wish I could be on that swing with my love. I questioned whether this could be considered a photo but I looked sat the rules which said "Share a picture of something or someone that you love". This certainly qualifies as a picture.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
Comment from royowen
A wonderful play on words Lisa, it's a really good 5/7/5 poetic example of what these short form poems, I think you have captured the heart of what a 5/7/5 poem is, well done, blessings Roy
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A wonderful play on words Lisa, it's a really good 5/7/5 poetic example of what these short form poems, I think you have captured the heart of what a 5/7/5 poem is, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Lisa
How sweet, maybe they should build romantic swings everywhere for everyone to use. That would be something fun for romantic couples to do to get into a two person swing and swing into the sunset
Or, maybe they could have covered two person swingsets that people could use to watch drive-in movies. That would be really romantic don't you think?
I wonder how many would fall out of their swings as they got frisky with each other
You should always give credit to the artist from whom you got the image. This looks familiar. I think it might've been done by one of the fan art artists, right?
If you don't know the artist and you got it from Google, you would credit Google if you got it from pixaBay your credit pixaBay
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi, Lisa
How sweet, maybe they should build romantic swings everywhere for everyone to use. That would be something fun for romantic couples to do to get into a two person swing and swing into the sunset
Or, maybe they could have covered two person swingsets that people could use to watch drive-in movies. That would be really romantic don't you think?
I wonder how many would fall out of their swings as they got frisky with each other
You should always give credit to the artist from whom you got the image. This looks familiar. I think it might've been done by one of the fan art artists, right?
If you don't know the artist and you got it from Google, you would credit Google if you got it from pixaBay your credit pixaBay
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An innocent and endearing post about this scene of a couple sitting on a double swing, making a connection and enjoying the fun, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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An innocent and endearing post about this scene of a couple sitting on a double swing, making a connection and enjoying the fun, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
Comment from lyenochka
I guess they are swingers on two different levels. They really enjoy their lives and make the most of it and they also sit together on a real swing and enjoy that, too.
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I guess they are swingers on two different levels. They really enjoy their lives and make the most of it and they also sit together on a real swing and enjoy that, too.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
Comment from patcelaw
I have always loved swinging and it would've been a delight to have had a double swing when I was married to my husband and we could've been swinging together. But our love affair was a swinging affair. Patricia.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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I have always loved swinging and it would've been a delight to have had a double swing when I was married to my husband and we could've been swinging together. But our love affair was a swinging affair. Patricia.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your review mama Pat
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Share a Photo Poetry contest. Nice job on this 5-7-5 poem. If I could make a suggestion it would be to treat your 5-7-5 poems like you would a Haiku with their format. I would drop all the capital letters and punctuation and leave it bare. Try it and see what you think. I did the same thing when I started here and now it is just habit to leave them off and it looks so much cleaner. Just a suggestion. See what you think. Good luck in the contest. Well done.
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An excellent entry for the Share a Photo Poetry contest. Nice job on this 5-7-5 poem. If I could make a suggestion it would be to treat your 5-7-5 poems like you would a Haiku with their format. I would drop all the capital letters and punctuation and leave it bare. Try it and see what you think. I did the same thing when I started here and now it is just habit to leave them off and it looks so much cleaner. Just a suggestion. See what you think. Good luck in the contest. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024