Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 68 "Wings"Illustrated poems
5 total reviews
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Lovely haiku here, with its imagery of hope for those hindered by temporary (or otherwise) mobility challenges. It is a great reminder of possibility and imagination and where they can take us. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Lovely haiku here, with its imagery of hope for those hindered by temporary (or otherwise) mobility challenges. It is a great reminder of possibility and imagination and where they can take us. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thanks for your kind review. I?m glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
It is good to see a crutch as a springboard to a better future rather than something to lean on forever. Of course, some people will always need the crutch, but then again, you never know.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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It is good to see a crutch as a springboard to a better future rather than something to lean on forever. Of course, some people will always need the crutch, but then again, you never know.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much for your thoughtful review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Great poem! Really well done, very good! I quite enjoyed it. I like your picture choice too it's very very cool!
You followed the haiku contest rules very well and came out with a smashing and stunning poem!
I find no issues with your poem as far as spelling and subject matter goes.
Once more suggestion if I may my eyes aren't the greatest you wouldn't mind turning up the font a? Little bit those of us who have a little blurry eyes would be happy to enjoy your poems. Thank you for your submission it's a great one keep on writing I love it!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Great poem! Really well done, very good! I quite enjoyed it. I like your picture choice too it's very very cool!
You followed the haiku contest rules very well and came out with a smashing and stunning poem!
I find no issues with your poem as far as spelling and subject matter goes.
Once more suggestion if I may my eyes aren't the greatest you wouldn't mind turning up the font a? Little bit those of us who have a little blurry eyes would be happy to enjoy your poems. Thank you for your submission it's a great one keep on writing I love it!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thanks. I?m so glad you enjoyed it. I think the suggestion about the size of the font is a good idea.
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Comment from pome lover
this is a very interesting thought. The more I think about it, and your title, It is perfect. I like the way your mind works (I'm sure you're thrilled :) but seriously, that's a very creative simile. Good job. To me, that rates a 6.
Katharine
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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this is a very interesting thought. The more I think about it, and your title, It is perfect. I like the way your mind works (I'm sure you're thrilled :) but seriously, that's a very creative simile. Good job. To me, that rates a 6.
Katharine
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the generous 6 star review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the suggestion of an aid to help us move when we are crippled by the impossible, a motivational Haiku, much enjoyed Jane, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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I enjoyed the suggestion of an aid to help us move when we are crippled by the impossible, a motivational Haiku, much enjoyed Jane, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much, Dolly. I?m so glad you enjoyed it.
