Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Wonderful epilogue, Barbara, it's the perfect way to end your book. You have a combination of happy circumstances. It's very romantic and heartfelt. Recovering from cancer, teaching again, and marrying the one we love. Katherine is a wonderful person that deserves to be happy. Well done! Congratulations.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023

Thank you for the kind support.

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

"to University of Texas" would probably read better as to the University of Texas.

"it's been little over a year" would read better as it's been a little over a year.

Seems Gabriel has matromony duties on his mind when they go to bed.

Interesting wrap up of this book.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023

I appreciate the help. I tend to read over those little words just as if they're there.

Comment from amahra

Exceptional

I'm so glad Katherine's cancer is still in remission. And honeymooning in the Rocky mountains of Montana seems so romantic. It was grat revisiting this story, Barbara.
"I have a feeling they're engrossed in [a] ball game and
"Smiling[,] Katherine said, ..."

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023

I already put that 'a' in. Maybe I forgot to save. I'll recheck it. I appreciate the help.

Comment from BethShelby

Exceptional

I think the epilogue is great and I'm glad you did one. Of course, we assumed it would have a happy ending. It is probably good you waited. I find any errors or have any suggestion for change. The six stars are for the whole book you deserved more that I had to give.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023

Thank you for the support.

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This is a good story with good character development. Katherine is fortunate to find a guy who wants to marry a woman with four kids. Gabriel is a brave man to take on 4 boys. Both are strong characters. You pretty much described a relationship that promises to be great because the coach isn't going to have the boys play football if they don't want to do so.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023

Thank you for the support.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I must admit my mind wrote an epilogue to this story anyway, but it's so nice of you to do one anyway, and to know what the boys are going to do with their lives, beautifully written dear Barbara, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : They're engrossed in (a) ball game.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023

Thank you for the support. I have made that correction. I did earlier, I must have forgotten to save. LOL

reply by royowen on 18-Jan-2023

Well done

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

I have no arguments with this happy ending epilogue. It sounds like Katherine and Gabriel will be happy forever, in spite of any difficulties which may arise from raising Katherine's children together. I always thought sixth grade was harder than eighth, but of course it would depend on so many things.
Favorite lines: She laughed. "Besides you'll be right there butting your way in."

He kissed her. "It's part of my charm, don't you know?"

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023

Thank you for the support.

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this epilogue. I remember following that story and am glad to see that you have added this. I am sure that this will be a good addition to your book.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023

Thank you for the support.

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

I like this ending. It makes me happy to have good endings, as in happy. You did an excellent job, and I will continue to enjoy your work. Have you started something new yet? Have a wonderful day. Shirley

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023

Thank you for the kind review and support.

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

You nailed it! I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Congrats on completion. Good call to do this final epilogue.


Typo: [They're=>their] personalities are so different.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023

Thank you for the catch. I always appreciate help.