Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 78 "Football Chapter 49"A mother faces life's struggles.
33 total reviews
Comment from Ramona Agin
Outstanding! Held my attention right up to the last word. My aunt and my sister both had to undergo chemotherapy and I went with both of them. It's a lonely, frightening ordeal even with someone by your side. You obviously know that you've been there it shows in your story which flows beautifully and is full of emotion. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Outstanding! Held my attention right up to the last word. My aunt and my sister both had to undergo chemotherapy and I went with both of them. It's a lonely, frightening ordeal even with someone by your side. You obviously know that you've been there it shows in your story which flows beautifully and is full of emotion. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
When a person has cancer, you must have faith in your doctor. And never give up on getting better or improving. This story sounds so real being you had experienced the same thing.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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When a person has cancer, you must have faith in your doctor. And never give up on getting better or improving. This story sounds so real being you had experienced the same thing.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
The story was well written. My husband went through this treatment with different medications. And Steven, the son, made a great statement. He'd rather have you without hair and alive. Thank you for posting.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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The story was well written. My husband went through this treatment with different medications. And Steven, the son, made a great statement. He'd rather have you without hair and alive. Thank you for posting.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome Barbara.
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
I enjoyed reading this the writer did very well well to the T if it's captivating if it's captivating I enjoyed it from the beginning to the beginning to the end great job
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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I enjoyed reading this the writer did very well well to the T if it's captivating if it's captivating I enjoyed it from the beginning to the beginning to the end great job
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from in777wr#
This was a very moving story. The emotions in this story are vividly described. The story from beginning to end is very captivating. The chemotherapy process is well described. A very heart felt story.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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This was a very moving story. The emotions in this story are vividly described. The story from beginning to end is very captivating. The chemotherapy process is well described. A very heart felt story.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Mickamus J
Thank you for writing this piece. It is enlightening to know what people have to go through with the process of chemotherapy. It is a very exhausting process and it is not a easy process.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you for writing this piece. It is enlightening to know what people have to go through with the process of chemotherapy. It is a very exhausting process and it is not a easy process.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you for reading. Yes, Chemo is horrible, but necessary.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
It's a horrible story and yet up[lifting seeing the support she is being given. Yes, the Football title, confused me until I read the notes. .....................................................
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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It's a horrible story and yet up[lifting seeing the support she is being given. Yes, the Football title, confused me until I read the notes. .....................................................
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. I was a little concerned when I read 'It's a horrible story...')
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing the notes, barbara. Your son sounds like a pretty smart guy!
-You did a good job with the chapter, and I am glad you kept more to the
emotion of the situation than the medical details.
-One of the things that makes this a good story is the family camaraderie,
from her own sons, Gabe, and both sets of parents, plus friends.
-I like that you show her accepting of the hugs and love her family wants to share.
-It's hard to believe there are only two more posts. I am enjoying the story too much!!!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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-Thanks for sharing the notes, barbara. Your son sounds like a pretty smart guy!
-You did a good job with the chapter, and I am glad you kept more to the
emotion of the situation than the medical details.
-One of the things that makes this a good story is the family camaraderie,
from her own sons, Gabe, and both sets of parents, plus friends.
-I like that you show her accepting of the hugs and love her family wants to share.
-It's hard to believe there are only two more posts. I am enjoying the story too much!!!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the understanding.
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You are very welcome. You sure you want to end this in two more chapters?!
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent story my friend! Congratulations on being RECOGNIZED;-) The storyline is interesting and held my attention throughout the piece and the characters interact nicely together!
Thanks so much for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Excellent story my friend! Congratulations on being RECOGNIZED;-) The storyline is interesting and held my attention throughout the piece and the characters interact nicely together!
Thanks so much for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. I hope you drop by again.
Comment from Sanku
This is an intensely emotional chapter. The family unity is very heartening. The details of chemotherapy have been correctly described.Katherine saying "I don't have a choice' is hard hitting..
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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This is an intensely emotional chapter. The family unity is very heartening. The details of chemotherapy have been correctly described.Katherine saying "I don't have a choice' is hard hitting..
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the understanding.