You Will See
This is about the truth being finally revealed.43 total reviews
Comment from Bonnie Seach
This poem is an explosion of truth and inspiration! It has most pleasing rhythm and rhyme schemes. The words flow easily and within meter. The idea of the poem is well worded, structured and formatted. It is pure joy! It is informative and directional. The visual presentation attractively enhances the theme.
It must surely open the hearts of lovers of righteousness. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes for the contest
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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This poem is an explosion of truth and inspiration! It has most pleasing rhythm and rhyme schemes. The words flow easily and within meter. The idea of the poem is well worded, structured and formatted. It is pure joy! It is informative and directional. The visual presentation attractively enhances the theme.
It must surely open the hearts of lovers of righteousness. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes for the contest
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thank you my dear sister. It is my firm belief that if those with an opportunity to speak, does not speak the truth, your words are meaningless.
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Hello dear brother. What a fine poem you wrote. I have saved for myself if you don't mind.
It is a fine witness. I believe it will find righteous hearts. Rich blessings.
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What a fine work and a fine witness dear brother. I have kept it for myself if you don't mind, please. Take care and rich blessings 🙏🌹
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By all means do so. You honor our dear God by recognizing his truth. I am merely a vessel as I am sure you are also.
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Dear Nomi. I appreciate your wisdom and sincerity. Thank you. We are indeed vessels. 2 Corinthians 4:7
We are vessels through which Jehovah God can show his power. It is a responsibility which is a privilege and is deserving of the utmost appreciation. Thank you. Take care
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, You Will See, presented in ten rhyming couplets, predicts that many of those who hollar, "Lord! Lord!" will not enter the Kingdom of Heaven. Great job.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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This poem, You Will See, presented in ten rhyming couplets, predicts that many of those who hollar, "Lord! Lord!" will not enter the Kingdom of Heaven. Great job.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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Exactly. Thank you my friend.
Comment from lancellot
This is very well made. I think it will appeal to those who know this subject well. For the rest of us. some lines may not be so clear. for example:
Murderers of God's son made a debt none could afford.
Soon the time will arrive for payment to be made
It will occur although the date has been delayed.
Yes, it rhymes, but I can't see anything the Lord does to be delayed. Would not it happen when He was ready? There are few more questions but you get what I mean.
Still, this is well made.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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This is very well made. I think it will appeal to those who know this subject well. For the rest of us. some lines may not be so clear. for example:
Murderers of God's son made a debt none could afford.
Soon the time will arrive for payment to be made
It will occur although the date has been delayed.
Yes, it rhymes, but I can't see anything the Lord does to be delayed. Would not it happen when He was ready? There are few more questions but you get what I mean.
Still, this is well made.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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The delay is to give as many a chance to be saved as possible. He could have ended things at any time, only his mercy has allowed things to continue as is. The debt that his son's murders have incurred is payback for the deed.
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Thank you.
Comment from royowen
Yes, I see some who say they believe but do not. Knowing Christ is an ever increasing growth in the knowledge of him, the cross is merely the beginning, but when people say they are a "good" person, they have no idea of the value placed on the cross, and the wickedness and rebellion, the road is not an easy one, but Jesus is the only path to salvation. Beautifully written Bro, an excellent post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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Yes, I see some who say they believe but do not. Knowing Christ is an ever increasing growth in the knowledge of him, the cross is merely the beginning, but when people say they are a "good" person, they have no idea of the value placed on the cross, and the wickedness and rebellion, the road is not an easy one, but Jesus is the only path to salvation. Beautifully written Bro, an excellent post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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Thank you my dear brother. I appreciate you.
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Bless you
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
You Will See
by nomi338
I dislike people who say they are Christians but hate each other. It's very sad. They are hypocrites.
The rhymes do not seem forced. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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You Will See
by nomi338
I dislike people who say they are Christians but hate each other. It's very sad. They are hypocrites.
The rhymes do not seem forced. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you Gypsy. I think blue roses are absolutely beautiful.
Comment from karenina
Prudent and righteous observation. False Christians are disseminating hate and bias in His name. This is a hundred fold worse, in my mind, to those who do not believe, or who believe differently. To sin in Jesus name is evil!
Karenina
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Prudent and righteous observation. False Christians are disseminating hate and bias in His name. This is a hundred fold worse, in my mind, to those who do not believe, or who believe differently. To sin in Jesus name is evil!
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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You are correct on all fronts. Thak you so much for a wonderful review.
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Thank you for your insight!
Karenina
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
And, there are those too who claim to be Christians, willfully and knowingly sinning while claiming they are covered by 'Grace'.
I loved the entire poem, especially the theme of false Christians and their actions and false beliefs.
Most wonderful, dear Sir!
Gale
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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And, there are those too who claim to be Christians, willfully and knowingly sinning while claiming they are covered by 'Grace'.
I loved the entire poem, especially the theme of false Christians and their actions and false beliefs.
Most wonderful, dear Sir!
Gale
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you Gale. Your kind words touch my heart.
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You are so welcome :)
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Nomi338,
Nice piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting true and false Christians.
3rd stanza is particularly noteworthy.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Hello Nomi338,
Nice piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting true and false Christians.
3rd stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, for both your uplifting comments and your support. Some I am sure, will feel that they are being preached to and object.
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Nomi338, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Cogitator
You certainly have a gift. Although I seldom respond, I do check on your work. This piece is definitely one of your best. I cannot suggest anything resembling an improvement...John
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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You certainly have a gift. Although I seldom respond, I do check on your work. This piece is definitely one of your best. I cannot suggest anything resembling an improvement...John
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you John. Your comments are very encouraging and uplifting.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
We should be encouraged to always tell the truth. God is truth. Or Truth is God.Telling the truth is always a better way to live! People always favour honesty, even if it's not always what they want to hear. Being truthful takes Strength And Courage and many of us find it challenging as being dishonest is sometimes the easier route to take. I liked your spiritual poem. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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We should be encouraged to always tell the truth. God is truth. Or Truth is God.Telling the truth is always a better way to live! People always favour honesty, even if it's not always what they want to hear. Being truthful takes Strength And Courage and many of us find it challenging as being dishonest is sometimes the easier route to take. I liked your spiritual poem. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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And I like your honest and supportive comments. Thank you very much.
