Feeling Good in the Rain
A walk down memory lane.5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Feeling Good in the Rain, seems to tie the theme together with THC and the nice marijuana plants that respond to rain with a leap in growth. Kooky.
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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This poem, Feeling Good in the Rain, seems to tie the theme together with THC and the nice marijuana plants that respond to rain with a leap in growth. Kooky.
Comment Written 22-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Thank you, Bill. :) This rain makes for a happy feeling, for everything grows.
Comment from lyenochka
Hi Jose! I know you said you don't like the rain and yet you wrote a haiku about the rain. What does the first line mean? Whose hands are descending? And what does the second line mean? Is that a marijuana plant? (Sorry, I am clueless about this stuff.)
Anyway, I liked the alliterative last line. Rising in spirit with the rain is descending is a good picture.
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Hi Jose! I know you said you don't like the rain and yet you wrote a haiku about the rain. What does the first line mean? Whose hands are descending? And what does the second line mean? Is that a marijuana plant? (Sorry, I am clueless about this stuff.)
Anyway, I liked the alliterative last line. Rising in spirit with the rain is descending is a good picture.
Comment Written 22-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Helen, it's a way to say that the guy is feeling good after lowing his hands to pick the bud off the plant to roll it or smoke it in a pipe. Yes, it is a cannabis plant. :) I hope it doesn't offend you.
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It doesn't offend any more than any other kind of smoking. Smoke makes me gag. I'd be out in nature among the trees and suddenly a smoker walks by or a lady with too much perfume and *gag* ! Lol.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello my friend, I read your short Haiku and could not make out the meaning. Is that marijuana? I am unfamiliar with it. I wish you good luck in the contest!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Hello my friend, I read your short Haiku and could not make out the meaning. Is that marijuana? I am unfamiliar with it. I wish you good luck in the contest!!
Melissa
Comment Written 22-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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That's a cannabis plant, Melissa. :) I used to enjoy the feeling when I was young. I hope it doesn't offend you.
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I am not offended, just didn?t know what type of plant it was for sure. I think cannabis for medicinal use could be a game changer for those with seizures.
Comment from aryr
Good luck with your entry in the describing something haiku, Jose. It was short but direct and very much to the point. It is a shame that nature can be so cruel at times, droughts in some places, month long rains in another. But I have learned that nature supplies just exactly what is need for each place. I am so glad that with the rain the plants and flowers can grow. Well done, I liked the picture as well.
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Good luck with your entry in the describing something haiku, Jose. It was short but direct and very much to the point. It is a shame that nature can be so cruel at times, droughts in some places, month long rains in another. But I have learned that nature supplies just exactly what is need for each place. I am so glad that with the rain the plants and flowers can grow. Well done, I liked the picture as well.
Comment Written 22-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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I used to like that picture as well, Alie. :) I hope it doesn't offend you.
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No offence here, I thought is was great. You are so welcome Jose.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm not quite sure what "rolled or smoked" means here but I understanding the sentiment of rain feeding the plants, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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I'm not quite sure what "rolled or smoked" means here but I understanding the sentiment of rain feeding the plants, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Thank you, Dolly. :)