Comment from ReaThomas

Excellent

Gorgeous. This is so beautiful and very romantic indeed. The third stanza is my favourite - especially the use of 'coalesce' - beautiful! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013

Thanks Rea I'm so glad you enjoyed this and thanks also for the good luck wishes.

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

Beautifully composed poetry about passionate lovely this free verse poignantly present in a unique manner. The inline rhymes are lovely as they express the various emotions.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013

Many thanks Treischel for a lovely review.

Comment from Rmocruz

Excellent

You have successfully satisfied the writing prompt with
this rhymed free verse. Great employment of alliteration
and metaphor.
A worthy prompt entry.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013

Thanks Rmocruz you review was fab.

reply by Rmocruz on 09-Aug-2013

You're welcome.

Comment from rhonny

Excellent

Very nicely written love poem. The passion is contained in lines that flow nicely and words that hold a pleasant rhyme. Nice artwork too.

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 Comment Written 09-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013

Cheers for a wonderful review rhonny.

reply by rhonny on 09-Aug-2013

:O)

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Well done...I love the word............. coalesce..................beautiful imagery.
Like warm winds that caress my core.................
Beautiful picture
God bless well done

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 Comment Written 09-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013

kiwijenny many thanks for a great review, God bless you too.