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Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Rosie Meets Sir John"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from royowen
So, Sir John didn't receive the idea very well at all, he stumbles at the bankrolling proposal, I guess I would too, because he accuses Joe of probably dumping the child afterwards, but we know his character could never do that. The goons dart off when Veronica starts throwing stuff at them, but I think Rosie has a role to play yet. Well done Sandra, excellent episode, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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So, Sir John didn't receive the idea very well at all, he stumbles at the bankrolling proposal, I guess I would too, because he accuses Joe of probably dumping the child afterwards, but we know his character could never do that. The goons dart off when Veronica starts throwing stuff at them, but I think Rosie has a role to play yet. Well done Sandra, excellent episode, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much, Roy, for your lovely review, and telling me your thoughts. Yes, good old Rosie has a big part to play! :)) I'm enjoying her, almost as much as Mildred. (almost!) Big hugs, and God bless, dear friend. :) Sandra xx
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Well done Sandra
Comment from Beck Fenton
How cleverly you weave your story! The action and dialogue flows smoothly and entices the reader to see what's next. And then you give a good look... I could see the action plainly and almost felt sorry for the poor goons. Nicely done, Sandra!
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How cleverly you weave your story! The action and dialogue flows smoothly and entices the reader to see what's next. And then you give a good look... I could see the action plainly and almost felt sorry for the poor goons. Nicely done, Sandra!
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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I know, they did get a bit of a scare, didn't they? Thank you so much, Beck, for reading this part of my story, that is so kind of you. Your review is wonderful, it tells me I might be getting it right. Thank you, my friend. :))
